An Ocean For A Part

You have understood the poem's subject, but your comment has made it clear to me that I did not present the subjects correctly. It is a poem of two people parting, both of which have/ had different perspectives about said parting, but will undoubtedly share a loneliness in their conclusion. They will see the world from different views. I am leaving to teach in South Korea in four days and this poem was written after I had a discussion with the girl I was dating about our finite time together. Hence "sideside" is us standing "side by side" It was my hope that removing "by" and the relevant spaces would illustrate a closeness being felt in the final weeks together. The title is a play on words. An ocean will be separating us. The original title I had come up with was, "An Ocean Far Apart" , but then I realized that the ocean plays a part in the saga. I felt I could explain the ocean's role and still expound upon its significance as a driving force, by naming is as a part. Hence, "The Ocean For A Part" because if you read it quickly you may read, "An Ocean Far Apart"