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when i went to see the elephant

when i went to see the elephant

 

when i went to see the elephant,

brown-grey elephant,

what did the elephant say?

 

of beetles and grasses we did converse

of leopards and lions,

giraffes gave us verse.

 

i asked the elephant,

“are you close to the earth?”

elephant looked

with a wise old glance,

one tear from its eye

dropped to dust

it moved a foot an inch.

 

when i went to see the elephant,

brown-grey elephant,

touched its long nose, quietly,

next to its wrinkled skin,

listened to its breathing

i heard

magic singing,

 

i asked the elephant, “are you close

to the earth?”

 

the elephant swayed from side to side

took a step, gave me a ride,

gently bent its knees and allowed

me to mount,

between its proud ears.

 

“earth,” spoke the elephant,

then the elephant was still,

not a word from its mouth was heard.

 

elephant went gliding

on effortless round feet,

with its eyes

showed me thickets and plains,

water and sky,

why the tear dropped from its eye.

 

“time was,” the elephant finally said,

“i could walk for years, from

morning to bed.  only tick birds

for company, ticks as well.

 

rain, wind, light, and sky were

new and free. 

now, my friend,

it is different, as well you see. 

from years gone by

i have walked and watched, listened

to changes on earth.

years gone by a

weary road,

good road, until recent

 

past when humans came for my

ivory beauty, liquid blackness from

under your feet and mine-

 

messages i hear from the ground.

why are you humans still around?

 

it was once so peaceful, before you

showed up, days were brilliant and

kind. 

 

long days, not a sound but birds,

crickets, new leaves growing, nest building,

birthing of new life everywhere.  now look,

human, look what is left--dust, my good sir,

dust; at least dust was once clean.”

 

i went to see the elephant,

brown-grey elephant,

sadness was all around.

 

forever gone, life it once knew,

buried in the ground.  once master,

master

of all it surveyed, numbered years

have passed,

in rain, wind and quiet,

always gentle, always kind,

elephant

thought it would last.

 

elephant now lives looking over

its shoulder,

for human usurpers

of peace--everywhere, they are

everywhere, turning the world to

grease.

 

“why,” asked the elephant, “do

humans act as they must?”

i had no answer,

all i could do was cry,

our tears mingled

in the dust.

 

vcp

 

2007

— Victorclaude, Jan 28, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Wallace Stevens, D. H. Lawrence, Charles Bukowski, Bob Dylan, Leonard Cohen, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Percy Bysshe Shelley, T. S. Eliot, E. E. Cummings, Emily Dickinson, William Butler Yeats, Pablo Neruda, Joni Mitchell, William Shakespeare, Basho, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Kelly Marie Hayner, Susan Wydville. D. Phillip Caron, Elizabeth Bishop.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Bow. Exquiste!I have seen

Bow. Exquiste! I have seen an elephant weep I have seen men blind other men who knew not what they do when they touch an elephant in the living room of the dusty earth how touch must be tender like a lover's caress in the heart of worth. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Albert

Albert, Thanks for your read and comment. I had a good time with this one. Victor Claude
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 4 months ago

Ah Victor a delight

It may take a few more of your poems to get the clear idea of your skill and style but I know I like this a lot. You have a deep message in your words but a weaving of a story that twines the reader with the words, a gift indeed. The word grease in the second last stanza threw me a bit...can you talk about that context you have used it in, I am curious. Thanks Seabhac
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

answering your query

Seabhac, I don't know how you think of grease in the United Kingdom, but to me, in the growing fascist state of the USA grease is a filthy business, and we are fouling this continent as never before with burning oil in the forms of: gasoline, heating oil, oil derivatives, plastic bags that are petroleum based -- oil seems to be in everything. Dead dinosaurs dragged from the ground in the form of crude to litter the skies and waters with a greasy slick that should never have come to pass, but has. I was merely commiserating with the elephant in this piece, and the elephant, me. Grease is dirty, and dirt sticks to it; it is difficult, if not impossible to clean up after it is spilled. This was my point, and nothing more. I hope this clarifies this for you. If not ask me the question again in a different way. Thanks much for the read and comment. Victor Claude
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you Victor

Yes this has clarified it,I have sometimes found that the meaning of words can change across the world. Yes this has painted a clearer image of your intent.It really is an excellent poem and I wanted to understand it fully. Seabhac
OM

odd molly

16 years 4 months ago

I am happy that I found this

I am happy that I found this poem today because it is the most wonderful and also very well written. A making tears poem. Excellent love. o molly
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

Molly

Molly, I am happy that you found it, too. I had trepidatious fun with this one. This piece wrote itself; I was just hear to hit the proper keys. I love it when that happens. Thanks for the read and the kind comment. Victor Claude
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Not one note out of chord

Not one note out of chord ... brilliant write ... love elephants, have one made of crystal sitting on my desk lol kind regards Jayne-Chloe
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

hola

Jayne, Thank you for your very kind remarks. Elephants have always been one of my favourites, too. Victor Claude
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

hola

Thank you, Mona. Humans have taken it much too literally the thing about dominating the Earth. I have always considered it a gift, but so many don't that it is truly discouraging. Victor Claude