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when i went to see the elephant
when i went to see the elephant
when i went to see the elephant,
brown-grey elephant,
what did the elephant say?
of beetles and grasses we did converse
of leopards and lions,
giraffes gave us verse.
i asked the elephant,
“are you close to the earth?”
elephant looked
with a wise old glance,
one tear from its eye
dropped to dust
it moved a foot an inch.
when i went to see the elephant,
brown-grey elephant,
touched its long nose, quietly,
next to its wrinkled skin,
listened to its breathing
i heard
magic singing,
i asked the elephant, “are you close
to the earth?”
the elephant swayed from side to side
took a step, gave me a ride,
gently bent its knees and allowed
me to mount,
between its proud ears.
“earth,” spoke the elephant,
then the elephant was still,
not a word from its mouth was heard.
elephant went gliding
on effortless round feet,
with its eyes
showed me thickets and plains,
water and sky,
why the tear dropped from its eye.
“time was,” the elephant finally said,
“i could walk for years, from
morning to bed. only tick birds
for company, ticks as well.
rain, wind, light, and sky were
new and free.
now, my friend,
it is different, as well you see.
from years gone by
i have walked and watched, listened
to changes on earth.
years gone by a
weary road,
good road, until recent
past when humans came for my
ivory beauty, liquid blackness from
under your feet and mine-
messages i hear from the ground.
why are you humans still around?
it was once so peaceful, before you
showed up, days were brilliant and
kind.
long days, not a sound but birds,
crickets, new leaves growing, nest building,
birthing of new life everywhere. now look,
human, look what is left--dust, my good sir,
dust; at least dust was once clean.”
i went to see the elephant,
brown-grey elephant,
sadness was all around.
forever gone, life it once knew,
buried in the ground. once master,
master
of all it surveyed, numbered years
have passed,
in rain, wind and quiet,
always gentle, always kind,
elephant
thought it would last.
elephant now lives looking over
its shoulder,
for human usurpers
of peace--everywhere, they are
everywhere, turning the world to
grease.
“why,” asked the elephant, “do
humans act as they must?”
i had no answer,
all i could do was cry,
our tears mingled
in the dust.
vcp
2007
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Bow. Exquiste!I have seen
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Albert
seabhac
16 years 4 months ago
Ah Victor a delight
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
answering your query
seabhac
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you Victor
odd molly
16 years 4 months ago
I am happy that I found this
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Molly
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Not one note out of chord
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
hola
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
hola
moianna
16 years 4 months ago
Beautiful poems