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Jan 27, 2010
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7 besos
Love wrapped in
Her tender lips
“El primero beso”
His heart flips
Every kiss
Takes him on a trip
“Un segundo beso”
His heart skips
Can’t find words
To describe
“El tercer beso”
A pleasant surprise
Out of breath
Out of his mind
“El cuarto beso”
Stops time
Caught in between
The nanoseconds
“El quinto beso””
His heart beckons
Strength and dominion
Over his fears
“El sexto beso”
Almost brought tears
None compare
To the last
“El septimo beso”
A spell it cast…
…En su Corazon….
Her tender lips
“El primero beso”
His heart flips
Every kiss
Takes him on a trip
“Un segundo beso”
His heart skips
Can’t find words
To describe
“El tercer beso”
A pleasant surprise
Out of breath
Out of his mind
“El cuarto beso”
Stops time
Caught in between
The nanoseconds
“El quinto beso””
His heart beckons
Strength and dominion
Over his fears
“El sexto beso”
Almost brought tears
None compare
To the last
“El septimo beso”
A spell it cast…
…En su Corazon….
— marich7, Jan 27, 2010
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marich7
16 years 3 months ago
my deepest apologies, i shouldn't have left that out!
marich7
16 years 3 months ago
more to explain sorry again