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Daughter of 'Aye dor dare'
1)
Ember hair tossed wild, peridot eyes burned bright
moon pale skin, downy and fair
her bare velvet feet dirty
torn garments soiled
but for this she had no care
for demons hunted her wedding eve
acres long, she toiled in flight
fleeing, through flower strewn fields
spilt milk, moon glens
tired muscles burned, fire red lungs
through valleys, hills, she stumbled, flailed
determinated to not be caught
she panted and huffed
her chest heaving rough
she thought of her mother fraught
Cold, dead-end cliffs, halted flight
on this stormy, fearsome filled night
with only shawl wrapping her frame
she stared deep the water, calling her safe
and arced, breath stunned, eyes locked tight.......
2)
With worry and strain all her teaching in vain
for to long had her daughter suffered
at the hands of the many
who had more and plenty
well no more would the wrongs be covered
she'd tell of the story, tell of the tale
of her beautiful daughter now dead
jumped off the cliff at 'Aye dor dare'
sailed through the air in a leap off the top
landing wreckless sea, now her bed
promised to a sweet man, king of his cottage
temperate in mannor, loin in heart
her beau of childhood
meant to be wed on the eve of Hens galen
their lips though, were never to meet
for lord of the manor, man of might
her daughters mean employer
had other intentions mean of heart
lusting her
he was preditor, prowler...
well, thought her mother, anguished in loss
of this there will be no more
she peered up, seeking Nemesis
preying for advice for revenge
the death star felt sorry for this woman poor,
the sea roared her name
nemesis showered meteor
the winds wracked down his doors
mother stood watching
at his sanity she started to claw
Oh lord of the manor, so greedy
and thick, in his lust grown
tormented and turbulent
till the girl consumed his thoughts
and in his sickness, was slain
Comments
Baz
16 years 3 months ago
Hi Madam F
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
Hello Baz,I have found the
Candlewitch
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Vicki
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
turbulant indeed it is!! im
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Dear Vix
Lunegirl
16 years 3 months ago
awww thanks Jayne-chloe,I do