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Jan 27, 2010
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Timed lightning
I can hear the thunder rolling
in the stillness of a night
I can see the lightning flashing
its white fire burns me bright
I reach to touch a strand
to only feel my hand go numb,
it starts to coil my arm
and wraps around my thumb
I can feel a gentle pulsing
coursing through my soul,
and suddenly the wind blows
its my path to feeling whole
as elements connect
my body comes to life,
with the earth underneath
I take off my form to flight
dipping to the ocean
I play amongst the waves,
flying up a cliff-side
I've got adrenaline to save
riding on a tempest
that rips along a storm,
sitting on a headland
watching for the morn
gusting through the bush
the wattle sways with rhyme,
now returning to the earth
is my soul with time
— Seren, Jan 27, 2010
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CyberSpace
16 years 4 months ago
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Seren
16 years 4 months ago
thanks darlin just a whim I
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
In the meantime, my precious
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Not returning just visiting
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16 years 4 months ago
Thumbs Up
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16 years 4 months ago
Dear Hippie
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16 years 4 months ago
Thor would be proud!
Seren
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Dearest Jayne
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Dear Big Sis
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16 years 4 months ago
You still have it!
Seren
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Dear Gee
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16 years 4 months ago
Small tweak...
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
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Timed Lightening
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16 years 4 months ago
Jayne...
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Dear Jayne, to fix or not to
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16 years 4 months ago
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16 years 4 months ago
storms
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Dear Victor
Lightman Georg…
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Hello from The Lightman
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Dear George