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A Singleness of Nature

I offer us to both hold hands
so we'll walk side by side,
I offer to buy us wedding bands
should you yearn to be a bride.

I offer to share our life
with every season of the leaf,
we'll share the good times, and the strife
all the joy, and all the grief.

I welcome your keen insight
so honest and so true,
and when surroundings don't feel right
I will cling fast, to you.

To live my life without you
my mate, and my true heart,
I'd be lost at what to do
and where to even start.

I pledge to you my only code
that seeks things positive,
keeping our humble abode
a place we both can live.

And finally growing older
I still will love your face,
I'll offer you my shoulder
while still giving you your space.

And after life's chilly fall
I'm pledging from my heart,
that I would give my very all
so we can't slip apart.

And lastly, I do promise
that I will never roam,
sealing that with a loving kiss
as we walk the pathway home.
— docmaverick, Jan 26, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Thank-you, Annie....

...I'm very grateful for the comment. I was beginning to think it hadn't been read so, your response was greatly relieving, and highly refreshing ! I'm happy it caught your eye, and that you liked it. I'm seeing stars. Thanks, again. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

I can appreciate that, Annie....

...I guess that's why I always come back to that, "lyrical style"...and continue to tippy-toe through the lawless corridors of "freeform". It's that "foreign" to me ! I'm still trying to mix it up, though. Thanx, for the encouragement, I appreciate the feed-back. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
J

jona

16 years 4 months ago

another Gem.

I am so glad i stumbled onto your pages as i like your style and especialy your unique way of making the words BEG to be sung.im not surprised to see your in a band but with this talent,you should be BIG.maybe you just need something like YOUTUBE!hope you meet the right connections.all the very best o luk from Scotland.
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Wow ! Thanx for that, jona....

...that's quite an endorsement ! You-Tube, huh? Not to mention, that you're my first bit of Scottish praise, as well ! I DO, really appreciate the feedback, too. ....I too, am really grateful to serendipity, for "luring" your eyes down the pages towards this write ! You, my Scottish friend.....have successfully used your words, to make my day ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
J

jona

16 years 4 months ago

Your work

It mite seem that the big time is for the lucky ones,so just gaze towards oor very own and so very recent "SUBO!Susan Boyle"the new surprize will knok you off your feet as she is 81 years old and had everyone cheering her evry note as she grew and grew to perfection.just wait and if that does,nt shove you on then take to the road and head for old Scotia.lol.when can i hear your band/soon i hope and i,m going to chek oot all the rest o yer gems.cheers pal and all the best o luk.
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

And cheers to you, jona....

...I truly appreciate your words of encouragement ! That settles it ! I absolutely NEED Scotland to offer up it's "white cliffs of dover" as a charitable, and lucrative background to launch my, "Book of Whispers"! Now THAT.....would be, "class"! Thanx. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

doc

"I offer to share our life with every season of the leaf," Salient lines in this nice ditty. How many have said something similar only to betray the words with wandering eye. Very solid writing. Victor Claude
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

How can an eye of wonderment

How can an eye of wonderment betray? It is what it is. Doc, you have good medicine for what ails the human soul. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine