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Dark Red crooked lines

If thou is to touch thys heart make sure to be careful
becuse this heart is mane of glass 
with dark red crooked lines that go thugh it.
Thy's glass heart can't hold anymore of these dark red crooked lines
there are too many
The dark red dripping though the lines and landidng on thy's hands
There is too much thy's hands cant hold it all
One more of these lines and thy's heart will shatter
Shatter into a million tinny pieces
When this happens thy's hands will overflow with all this dark red substance
And thy's heart will be broken forever and no longer exist in this dark cruel world
Thy will no longer own a heart
Thy will never love again
Thy gives you her last chance
— Abi, Jan 26, 2010

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yenti

yenti

16 years 3 months ago

Heart Broken

Woops this is a lovely piece but the spelling needs attention, read some of the others poems and comment here and there then write this one again, you have written it well but have muddled it a little, Yours Ian.T