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MattyD Naturally

Similar to Mos Def & Talib Kweli
I am most definilty one to be lyrically amazing
So if you can see optically you'll see me
rise high as the sea off coast of Italy
maybe in Sicily It'll bring something from Riplys
that's hard to beleive
yet it's just a human being
by the name of MattyD
who's a meat eating, mind seeding, warm breathing
Homosapian specie with no meaning
who just wants to be hobo savin for humanity
similar to Bilbo in Lord of the Rings
It's a sword that I swing
Humbling all the Lords that think
differently then me on the brink of insanity
It pleases me to see them deceased
cause then it will increase society
and decrease piety
fuck the higher archy
we must march with dire desire
so like the Larch tree fight and prespire
light this prescribed quior on fire
we don't need that lier no more
for were tighter without it for sure
so start the fore closure
— mdehe, Jan 26, 2010

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

Not scared, bored of self-aggrandising rappers

who think rap is automatically poetry. But got to hand it to you, the section- It’s a sword that I swing Humbling all the Lords that think differently then me on the brink of insanity [than] It pleases me to see them deceased cause then it will increase society and decrease piety fuck the higher archy we must march with dire desire is bloody brilliant! Really mate, check your spelling, it's not hard to fix. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
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mdehe

16 years 4 months ago

hahaha

i dont know, i think it's still poetry. there are many different kinds of poery and it seems unfair to discount any type. i dont like many types but i still cannot discount them. to me rap/hip hop, if written properly with nice metaphoers/similies and personification n such its really interesting and sounds awesome. im really glad you at least liked abit of it! take care, mattyd
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

I didn't say rap isn't poetry,

just that it isn't automatically so. We get some bloody aweful stuff posted here. You might be interested in a forum that's been running on just what a poem is. http://www.neopoet.com/blog/33358-why-did-you-suppose-was-poem Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible