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Jan 26, 2010
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The Heretic
Pharaoh of most noblest blood
Amenhotep IV reigns supreme
The temples of the Gods denounced
now begins the worship of the sun God.
He who Is me bow before the great Aten
Amun-Ra cannot hear your cries
for I am your king and God of the sun.
Worship with me when the sun rises
pray with me as the sun sets
and kneel before me In celebration.
Egyptian warriors ready for conquest
For my God is your only God
all others will be forgotten.
In the valley of the sun
Worship the great sun disk
you may now call me Akhenaten.
I am eternal your king lord sun God
seventeen years until the heretic dies
Great Goddess Isis eclipses the sun
for now the temples of the Gods have won.
— ZARRANO, Jan 26, 2010
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