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Ink Dragon
Jan 24, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Infested infidelity (adult content)

Hunger pushed them over the edge of reason

smooth cheek rested on scratchy cheek
for the thousandth time
brown hair interlaced with red
when suddenly

the humorous curve of his mouth made her want
the glow from her porcelain skin ignited his fingertips

green gaze dove into hazel ponds
lip locked on lip, tongue teased tongue
breast brushed breast, hands cupped buttocks

exploring new arousal in familiar regions
all boundaries fell
finding familiar sweetness in new territory
all bridges burned

they bit off bite after forbidden bite
gulped down unsuspected pleasure
swallowed consummation unchewed

their cores embraced in nuclear meltdown

what did they care for the fallout
of their scathing fauxpas de deux

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hillrider

16 years 3 months ago

Nuclear fallout

Nuclear fusion generates extreme heat and you have matched it here Nina. 8) And much like the ramifications of harnessing such an explosive process, this too can have disastrous consequences for those within the blast zone. Indi
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Indi,

Dale, extreme heat sounds about correct. Glad you got that from the piece, I found it no small feat to convey the urgency without veering into the pornographic. I hope I succeeded in showing that the pleasure is not purely sexual and that my two "protagonists" were taken by surprise... Yours, ~Nina
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 3 months ago

Fauxpas - non!

How could anything so deliciously sinful and sweet be a mistake! It just has to be paid for by the fallout and consequences. Deliberate, certain, purposeful all consuming need!YES!!! ;)but mistake-it aint! Nice write Nina! Boni
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Boni,

that kind of answers the question I asked in my comment above... deliberate, certain, purposeful all consuming need - that was exactly what I was trying to convey. Thank you! Yours, ~Nina
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 3 months ago

Ah Nina!

we as humans all know the 'right' answers, "morally wrong" 'reprehensible', 'despicable acts of betrayal' etc.etc. BUT!... we, a sentient, needing, feeling people, also instinctively KNOW more, NEED more! Just watched "Bridges of Madison County" and it so clearly portrays the wretched, high price most of us must pay - to do THE RIGHT THING! Thanks Boni
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

Me. Would you ever conceive me coming down moralistic?

So I won't. But I do know there is a lie hidden within this. It never takes you completely by surprise, there are always signs. I would have loved to have written this so well, but I couldn't. I know the signs. humouros? humorous Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Always, Jess?

I beg to differ. I believe there is the exception to that rule, when affection suddenly deepens into this kind of need... but be that as it may, glad the poem worked :) and thanks for catching the typo, on my way to fixing this now. Yours, ~Nina
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Dear Nina

It maybe morning for you but its night here and damn .... lmao I need a shower or something .... brilliant write dear one love and hugs Jayne x x x
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Dearest Jayne,

go get that shower ;) Your comment brought a huge grin to my lips. love&hugs Yours, ~Nina
Tam the Chanter

Tam the Chanter

16 years 3 months ago

Passion knows no ration

Could only make out a word here and there as my glasses had steamed up. This would indicate that the piece had the desired effect - very well done, my wee lassie. On re-reading I have a nagging thought that the relationship might be incestuous rather than rite of passage. It made me think, so well done again. (I suppose incest is ok if its kept in the family.) Kindest Regards Ian
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Ohoh, Lonnie,

hope you have found a way to cool down. Thank you for your enthusiastic comment. Yours, ~Nina
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 3 months ago

green gaze dove into hazel

green gaze dove into hazel ponds Freakin brillent Nina, swallowed consummation unchewed Totally wicked. No wonder I always come back for more. That was a..... climatic expirence. hahaha. Awesome read, even if a tad personal, made it great. Not even vulgar. Not that I have ever seen you write vulgar, but it could become vulgar so easily. But not in your capable hands, or any of the other body parts so wonderfully explored here. lol. Awesome. Julie D.D.
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Phew!

Dear Julie, I am so glad it doesn't come across as vulgar. Really, really hard to write something that conveys passion adequately without slipping into vulgarity. That's what I learned when I was working on this one. Yours, ~Nina
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Tink

16 years 3 months ago

My dearest...

This is Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant! And hot! You have done a wonderful job of capturing the moment when the want and need override the idea of unknowing or unthinking of sexual attraction. its like when two in a relationship are arguing and its the furtherest thing from their minds, suddenly there's just one thing that ignites that strong passion and then, wow! great honest write! bravo! Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Wow, three brilliants!

My dearest Tink, I felt sooo insecure with this piece, I nearly ticked "moderate constructive criticism". But then I remembered that though I am a chick, I am not chicken! Glad this one works the way it's supposed to work. Yours, ~Nina
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Nina

The need, the heat, the hunger! While reading this, I wondered how you could know all this. I once (a very long time ago) had this with someone very special to me. But he turned out to be a paranoid schizophrenic... perhaps you have a secret lover in your past? Always, Cat
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Psst, Cat,

my best friend and I once kissed, which was very, very naughty indeed, as we both were in a relationship at the time. The rest is fiction, made up to fit the phrase "fauxpas de deux" that I dearly wanted to use :) Yours, ~Nina
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Wafi

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Nina

A great hot write, lol. Enjoyed this. Loved the first line, you said it so beautifully. Didnt get what "fauxpas de deux" means. Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~
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Ink Dragon

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Wafi,

how great to hear from you! Fauxpas means a fault, a mistake, a serious error. It is also alluding to pas de deux which is a ballet with two dancers. Yours, ~Nina