Essence II ... I Cry

Essence II....I Cry

      I know our paths have crossed before
            some other day sublime
      I know that somewhere long ago
            our hearts beat so in time

      I know we've traversed mountains
            we've sailed upon the seas
      I've seen this in a vision
            never ending.....you and me

      Yes it's true...you do consume me
            always ever on my mind
      If they looked into my heart
            wall to wall it's you they'd find

      Through my days you never leave me
            you're the constant in my life
      As the dark closes around me
            I hold you close throughout the night

      With me always is our music
            of our hearts and of our songs
      With me always are the words
            love you hard and love you long

      Always you I hold within me
            and I will until I die
      Knowing once again you'll find me
            and kiss away the tears I cry.

Sue 6/30/06

— jetz, Jan 26, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: South eastern Connecticut, USA

Critiques

Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

what a lovely poem about

what a lovely poem about love!! vix

jetz

16 years 4 months ago

Hi Vix,

Thanks for taking the time to read and leave a comment. I appreciate both. Sue

DimondDivinity

16 years 4 months ago

so sweet and soft it hits in

so sweet and soft it hits in a spot where you love and never lost the love beautifully written!!!

jetz

16 years 4 months ago

Hi Dimond,

I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. There really is such a thing as 'forever love.' I appreciate you taking the time to respond. I love your avitar. Sue

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

This is for both your poems..1 & 2...like I've said...your a natural born poet...it's a pleasure to read your work. I write in rhyme always but I can't write like you, but I still have your passion if only I could express it like you do. Brilliant writing all round Rosina xena465

jetz

16 years 3 months ago

Hi xena, Thanks so much

Hi xena, Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to respond. I appreciate your kind words more than you know. I have been going through a bit of a lull with my writing, and beginning to feel like maybe it was time to quit. There is an Essence III if you'd care to read it. It was co written by myself and Patrick, LorienLord. http://www.neopoet.com/node/33933 Once again, thank you. Sue

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I can’t imagine you ever

I can't imagine you ever wanting to quit...don't do it!!! I'll read essence 111 and get back to you sue. Rosina xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

I’ve just read essence

I've just read essence 111...this kind of love and passion is seldom felt with such conviction and depth. I can't imagine feeling like this for someone and being able to restrain from experiencing it for real. It's expert poetry and deserves to be a published piece(s) for all to experience. Rosina xena465