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Number Five Born are OBSERVATIONISTS

Number Five No.5 Born Human Beings are

Number five denotes

Money, movement, material,

as well as
Meeting the cross -section of society

It is a number which denotes

Vision and intelligence,

As also observation

And accident

Take care be not casual.

Steer clearly and you will know

Where you will be
in about five years..
my friend my good wishes for thee....

I don’t know
where I’ll be then
on earth or in heaven,
but surely I'll be out of this haven

My greatest of regards to thee.

You’re more prolific

calm, imaginative

After all

So peaceful

As a wind

In a raging storm...

The love of life

For many to adapt

As a norm

Coz of you
many newer poets like me
continue to be born...

— loved, Jan 26, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

You are very subtle,

You are very subtle, in your comings and goings, Loved... aren't you? ;-) ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine

loved

16 years 4 months ago

As long as frnds like U read me I shall compose Much more beautiful poetry Life itself is a poem One must know How to read it Albeit very few do But because of your reading me I wish to convey My love and thanks To you

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

wonderful comment i love such originality pl do read some more and comment thanks 2 u

themoonman

16 years 4 months ago

Loved...

I definitely like the idea behind this poem, for me though, it is in need of editing, a culling of unnecessary words. It would make a huge difference in all of your writing if you were to practice that. example... It is a number which denotes (I would omit this line) It accentuates vision with intelligence, observation as well as accident. from there some of the lines seemed to take on a more magical connotation... which, for me, added very little to the theme, or what I felt to be the theme, but I may have missed it all together, I'm famous for missing the point... or so my wife says (lol)... you are the author, what do you think? Richard

loved

16 years 4 months ago

sir

ur a great open minded man and i am proud of u so also would be ma'am ur admirable i am a scientist of the Human Mind poet is per chance/ACCIDENT, i don't write conventional poems only for fun OFF THE CUFF I HAVE WRITTEN 2100 POEMS IN AN YEAR FOR TRIOND sir if u give me ur DATE AND DAY AND TIME OF BIRTH U WILL WONDER HOW I WILL TELL U WHAT PERHAPS U DON'T KNOW ABOUT URSELF AND U WILL BE SURPRISED AS WE'VE NEVER MET OR HAVE WE??? THE DECISION TO SHARE THE INFORMATION IS ENTIRELY URS THOUGH AS PER UR OWN STATEMENT U SHOULD BE A FOURTH BORN RGDS TYPING PL EXCUSE THANKS

themoonman

16 years 4 months ago

Loved...

poet is per chance/accident, I don't write conventional poems... that is an interesting statement. Does it mean that you are here to learn with us how to be more affective in writing, because that is why most of us are here. Writing is fun for most writers, and we all do it off the cuff, but then if one goes through the write and edits for clarity and envisions what a reader may get from it, it makes for a "better" poem. Quantity does not mean quality, although that is a lot of work just for fun, I suggest that you read and attempt to help others with their poetry... it will help tremendously in your own writings, by looking at how others are successful at delivering a message, or not delivering the message, and letting them know one way or the other. You are a scientist, science and poetry are close cousins and always have been. I am number two of five... 6/12/58 not sure on the time of day. Richard

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

ur power of observation is par excellence thanks for all ur assistance As long as frnds like U read me I shall compose Much more beautiful poetry Life itself is a poem One must know How to read it Albeit very few do But because of your reading me I wish to convey My love and thanks To you

loved

16 years 4 months ago

HELLO SIR

WHAT NEXT NO MORE NEWS

loved

16 years 4 months ago

HELLO SIR AND FRIEND

If you add up 6 12 1958=32= 3plus 2=5 Ur power of observation is par excellence. I don’t know if science and poetry are cousins, but I can tell u Ur more intellectual than most of us. If I send u a questionaire I shall be able to calculate ur time of birth. I am the only one in this whole wide world who can do that to 100percent accuracy and if I am wrong I make a time correction . I have studied the Human Mind for a few decades now. Also since you are a Saggy Ur mind is rife full of multiple thoughts and Ur really a worldly wise person. My qty of poetry is an ‘’ego cancer’’ with which I suffer most since birth and so as I think I know more, even if a guy likes a line , as much as a phrase of my 2100 poems I feel gr888888 nice ego… have a gr888 friend philosopher and guide in you . Happy reading please do comment on my works harshly so that my pen can be sharpened as much as or as little as my shallow mind is. Thank u and my fondest continued regards Please excuse all kinds of errors, my typing is VERY poor

loved

16 years 4 months ago

hello sir

BUSY OR ANGRY >>> ???? PLEASE DO READ MY LATEST POEM THREE TRINITIES I LOVE UR COMMENTS THEY MAKE ME WISER THANKS SIR

themoonman

16 years 4 months ago

Loved...

Busy, definitely not angry... I will be sure and find time to catch up. thank you kindly for your vote of confidence. Richard

loved

16 years 4 months ago

YOU DESRVE IT

THE CONFIDENCE I HAVE IN YOU SIR TAKES ME A LONG WAY FROM HERE HOPE YOU WILL BEAR WITH ME DO TEAR ME APART IF SO NEED BE. RGDS LOVED

loved

15 years 11 months ago

busy not angry

...after ur last advice and my silliness i have observed u have never read a single poem of mine/ i know but i wanted you to also KNOW THAT I HAVE FOLLOWED UR ADVICE AS A GOOD FRIEND FOR WHICH I WANT TO THANK YOU. REGARDS

loved

16 years 4 months ago

HELLO SIR

Aging You take my wrinkles away I shall never fade that way And when I do come If ever I do Your way Then alone I shall pay Till then be happy and pray

loved

16 years ago

THE RATING ON THIS ONE HAS BEEN LEFT OUT I WONDER WHY

IN MY OWN ASSESSMENT THIS ONE IS AWING AND IF NOT AWNING

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

I was born on the 5th of

I was born on the 5th of September lol loved your poem loved lol love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")