Daughter of Eve

Sweet daughter of eve
Beautiful and delightful to my sight
But sweet delimma you bring too
Wish I could invite you into my eden
But I wonder if you may stay for long

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Country/Region: GHA

Comments

poewriter58

16 years 3 months ago

not enough

I would like to see this expnaded on. I feel it falls short but has a beautiful beginning Chrys

adjei agyei-baah

16 years 2 months ago

I am currently working on

I am currently working on it.you will definately hear from me.And hope you will enjoy it to the fullest this time.

lyz

16 years 2 months ago

Short and sweet

Getting the message across, yes, but I too would like to see more. Apart from that, it reads well and has tweaked the curiosity. Love Lyz. XX