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Jan 25, 2010
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into the abyss
into the abyss
illusions in night's brocade
tourmaline and snow
your mockingbird lips
singing
fierce grace
if we found each other in a poem
would we need a syllabus to
understand how the scent of
us came suddenly
like the trill of a songbird?
would we hasten time
into the deforestation of our impertinent civilization?
the life we share in the aftermath
when all paths must part--
having gone through
victories and inconsequentialities
in keys and locks, whispers
dark scars and kisses renounced
for ravaging testaments of fear--
in the deepest trench of oceans and the
stench of life's decay?
if we only have now to trace the images
in our mind, to swallow the sweat and
tears of a life lived in the awe of us,
do we cross the line to immortality?
the rain is gentle sometimes and floods
a holy desire: two spirits seeking flesh
to hold, plunge deeply
into one.
illusions in night's brocade
tourmaline and snow
your mockingbird lips
singing
fierce grace
if we found each other in a poem
would we need a syllabus to
understand how the scent of
us came suddenly
like the trill of a songbird?
would we hasten time
into the deforestation of our impertinent civilization?
the life we share in the aftermath
when all paths must part--
having gone through
victories and inconsequentialities
in keys and locks, whispers
dark scars and kisses renounced
for ravaging testaments of fear--
in the deepest trench of oceans and the
stench of life's decay?
if we only have now to trace the images
in our mind, to swallow the sweat and
tears of a life lived in the awe of us,
do we cross the line to immortality?
the rain is gentle sometimes and floods
a holy desire: two spirits seeking flesh
to hold, plunge deeply
into one.
— Kailashana, Jan 25, 2010
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Critiques
bjp
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
O, my Brian, “consider
bjp
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Anna,
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
With the squirming poignancy
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 4 months ago
becomes too dense in the
Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 4 months ago
your poem
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
Bravo. Standing in applause.
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you for understanding
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you for your
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
I bow to the grace of your
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Hi Barry, I said I
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
How can you not?
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
love and poetry are the
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Mum
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Ok, guys thanks for your
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
“What we do for ourselves
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
Yeah, I know exactly how big
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
And you will always bring a
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
Well I’m glad it brought a
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
A life of experience brandished in sweet sweaty tears.
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Into the abyss