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Tongue and Tooth

Vile, venomous viper
very agile in jarring juxtapositions
predators, and matadors
casting lots in caves of clay.

Juvenile existence
reminiscent of a road
where surgeons define virgins
with wanton words that sway.

Intolerable transitions
sever sweet serenity's song
yes, these doubts will create bouts
of confusion, classically.

Quite a curious cornucopia
this desert deliberately yields
recently said by an ugly head
grotesque, for all to see.

Meticulous mindsets click-ticking
waving wands within the wicked wind
time after time, a criminal mind
tightly tethers the truth;

only to see it slip, and slap
the cumulus clouds quite clear
our hearts trod, by a wink and a nod
betrayed by tongue and tooth.

— docmaverick, Jan 25, 2010

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Deep poem Doc … the

Deep poem Doc ... the language use as per the norm is impeccable and the pacing was apt for the piece ... well done again ... I am running out of superlatives to describe your work ... but will ever enjoy them love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

You're my Jayne-Chloe....

...and my favorite columnist ! Seriously.....don't you dare ever change ! You make me happy for writing poetry. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
AW

Antoinette Mar…

16 years 4 months ago

The tongue is referred to as a .......

sharp edged sword, and is it ever!! I enjoy your writes and variety of subjects so very much.....as you say, Doc...Please "write On"....for us!!! Bravo much admiration, Antoinette Mari...
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Thank-you, Antoinette....

...I'm seeing STARS ! Plus, this is my very first, "BRAVO"! I'm glad you enjoyed it...and thanx, for the encouragement ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.