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In the form of a letter: "Peninsula"

 Peninsula.

 

Dear M-J,

    You like the chair that is a harp !1957 ( N.Kr. 9500.- at an auction at Christmas 2004 in Oslo),
perhaps when you sit on it the harp begins to play your own melody instead of squeaks and groans
like a wooden chair! The effect is good enough in a blurred photo as it gives the object a life of its own.
We know the chair well but not much about the creator, we shall see if we can find out something
for you, perhaps the spelling is not Scandinavian enough as the name Jorgen is with the line through
the o, making the sound oe as in French.

    

We decided today, as the sun shone through holes in the clouds lighting' the peeping hill' Kikut,
with its snow and grey-stone patterns floating on a sea of white valley clouds, that we should go
to our favourite place at the other end of Lake Maridal, just to the back of the view. At 10 am.
We set off, seeing a notice as we came to the lakeside road saying 'Look for the many moose in the
area just now', we saw none but we did see their footprints and droppings. 

 

In that photo the roe-deer's prints are there too and the snow having melted then hardened round them
leaving them looking like printing blocks. Another had a moose valentine card, a frozen heart shaped
track. The next photo is of a 'cubist' branch. We do so love being there when the sun shines on the ice
and the trees newly decorated for Spring- catkins russet against the acid yellow of the lichen that grows
on the aspen trees. 

 

The surface of the lake is still frozen although I am not sure I would venture out on it any more-but as
you will see the ice is still quite thick. Slowly the ski-tracks that go over it into oblivion fade and finally
dive to the water. Listen there is the Yellow hammer and the Chaffinch singing loudly and by the rivers
edge are many types of duck and two Yellow Wagtails, dancing from beaver fallen trees branches and i
nto the forest, there's the buzzard on the very top of the tall fir tree, but no moose or roe deer to be seen,
are those the tracks of the beaver over the meadow there? 

 

Not any people to be seen in the area either, except for the first( a weather-worn old man browned by his
former visits) of the little gathering of OAP's that are always to be seen at one point on the edge of the
wood further back, there they have built up a fireplace and taken ancient chairs and hung this and that
in the trees nearby, when we went back there were a group there enjoying the sun.

    

Before we went out- there was such a silence, the electric clock with the battery was all that was heard,
its so very still here, of course it can be extra still at the moment as most of the occupants are way up
in their mountain huts; the town is still too with nothing open, so never come to Oslo at Easter.

    

Back to the walk as we went along the coast of the lake seeing so many fascinating things, just what I
love, remains or hints of long ago such as the piles of broken bricks at one point, or the plastic bags that
have become decoratively strung up in the many shaped driftwood (which if I lived in a bigger place here
I should want to take with me), pink granite boulders, grey stripes of small tree trunks, pinned down
saplings ready to whip up when the snow melts, a kind of paradise for us. I feel it must be a bit like
the place Uncle Phil loved when he went on holiday with a friend sailing on Lake Winnipeg, early in the
1900's he even met Indians there. 

    

We drove home again and saw that they were making a new platform for the people waiting for trams,
it reminded me of some thing we both saw in Oslo because he said- They are making it easier for the 'rag
man' to get on the trams- thinking of a 'bottle collector' with an old rucksack (rypesekk= grouse sack-the
old grey or khaki type of sack of canvas with a thin iron frame) on his back full to the brim with used
bottles his knees bending as he approached the tram, he could hardly walk for the weight, he put his hands
onto the two bars to get onto the tram but his hands slowly glided down them, his knees giving way at the
same time, slowly descending to the ground- it looked so very comic we couldn't help laughing and have
never forgotten the sight. 

 

Not to mention the other time when a drunk man was driving his car and collided with the tram Erik,
the police arrived and said something like, drive the car away, when he promptly drove the car into the tram
again with a wallop -the occupants of the tram roared with laughter that was so comic.

    

Love from Ann


 

         

 


— Nordic cloud, Jan 24, 2010

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Region, Country: Oslo and Flatdal, Norway., NOR

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Yes the art of letter

Yes the art of letter writing has all but died out hasn't it, no turn of phrase to make the spirit dance with someone else just for the moment like a glimpse of true friendship the sunbeams of morning send love to one another and make one feel happy and a part of the world and its lovely people. I do tend to get carried away myself, just ask anyone I write to, I am prolific like Anni, we think of this and that and that leads to this and that and before we know it we have sorted the whole damned world out in one go, that maybe, is it? Overdoing it, piling it on´, but when I do write it is real close communication with the reader, and usually its done straight away in answer to their letter, also disarming perhaps, but then the topics are hot and the brain can think up the harmonious counterpoints and we, for then it is we, dance together in the waltz of wonderful words and their art and their colour and their pleasure. I personally LOVE to dip my pen into the black ink, and with the sensitivity of the Zen monk about to write, or paint onto the white page, swirl the letters onto it in, also a kind of dance, so that the thoughts are carried out in shapes, maybe I would have loved to write in the Eastern symbols where their strength of character is expressed in each tiny flourish. And then there is the anticipation when the letter arrives and the envelope enjoyed, perhaps the stamp too, and inside opening the folded sheet like a butterfly and there is one's heart poured out in the form of a prose poem all so exciting. I did have an elderly (she died at 105 yrs!!) friend Madam B, she was a superb writer of French prose in the 1800 kind of panache, taking a whole page to profusely apologise for not having answered sooner, that answer became a little play in itself and the words of the French so enchanting that I just loved to open her letters written with a flowing style of writing showing her strong character and her artistic personality, she played the violin in a quartet, she was a much respected leader of the community in Bordeaux, she could speak perfect English, but i like to have her letters in French to enjoy them. I wrote in English as the art of writing French is not one of my strong sides!!!! Ah yes, the letter, and just look at this SH!!! inartistic tiny writing with next to no character it is a great demand on us to produce something that can superimpose art onto this font, and doing so make it sing in beautiful phrases and poetry, that's the challenge now, we have to compensate for the lack of the flow of ink, all part of the work of art that a poem should be. Sigh!! And big grumble at their loss, but life goes on and changes all the time so we just have to be towed along by our old apron strings into the mire of modern brash cartoon-like flashes of sound and sight until we're dizzy and hi away into our corner to contemplate the things we find of finer quality. Love to you Julie, and thank you for you comment. From Ann of Norway.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Letter

Ann The art of letter writing sadly lost these days. Yes I love my computer being a touch typist. I do write in my note pad everyday before posting my verses on the computer. I write with both hands and find my left hand writing is better. I do believe I was left handed when young, but in school we were not allowed to write with the left hand. So began writing with my right hand which can do various styles. Thank you dear lady for bring back this wonderful craft. You speak of such characters. You bring them to life. This is delightful, enchanting my dear friend You picture with its heart warming smile. So full of life. Electric Blue