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The Book Upon Your Shelf

 


We share a poem of how we feel,
Inspirations of thoughts so real
A poem of light for all to read.
Encouraging words to share a need

Consider this book upon your shelf,
Is it of you, or someone else
Poetic emotions,  just what is that,
Thoughts and words, left where they're at 

There's different strokes 
For different folks.
Noting no rights, noting no wrongs,
We share our words, we string along
.
Our lives are precious to be lived.
We yearn to love, and  forgive.
May we only write of how we feel.
One for all, we stand and kneel
.
Words may carry us to a soul,
May spread to others as a whole.
Cherish your life for what it is,
Encourage another for love is bliss. 

For after all is said and done
We're all together, just as one.
The poetic soul has much to share,
Compassion and love for how we care
.
The gift of words so true to heart,
Greetings to all, no meanings depart.
Release those words, only you shall
With an open mind, to share and tell 

So be fair to you, be true to yourself,
For here sits the book upon your shelf.

mms 3.24.10


 


 

— magics02, Jan 24, 2010

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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Catch the sunshine

It's okay Indi you know me I don't pay much mind anymore to negativity. It will sap your energy if you let it do so. NOT. I have too much going on for myself to indulge in negative nature..There is enough going on in this world and society this day and age that to focus on the better things in life and love one another is a better road to take. Thank you for the help on the computer, the chat and the visit to my page. Much love and blessings to you my INDI friend Mona
Morgana Tragic Proprietress

Morgana Tragic…

16 years 4 months ago

Love the theme

Love the theme of this poem, magics, and the message of it. not a huge fan of rhyming, I personally think this poem could have done better without the rhyming and just freestyled, but to each their own. Love the image of your book on the shelf, your own personal life out there for others to read and see. My only complaint would be the format/structure of the poem- I'd like to see the spacing consistent and only bolded or italicized when appropriate, otherwise those two factors combined make the poem look all over the page. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this. Peace
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Grazzi

Well thank you Morg and I appreciate your words. I tried to tweak it and format it does it look better now? I still have to get my computer to work correctly..lol..Thanks for the visit and see you neo cafe friend. Mona
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Morgana Tragic…

16 years 4 months ago

Looks much better, Mona,

Looks much better, Mona, good job on fixing it up. Reads a lot better and looks organized. Peace ~~~
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

thank you lovely

Thank you as always for your visits and how are you doing lately. Hope all is fine and I tweaked it up tonight. Let me know if it still reads write..lol Love ya gal Mona
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Mona

A wonderful write and I am pleased to have shared, enjoyed as well. Love Lyz. XX
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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Lyz good morning

Thank you Ms Lyz you are always a charming woman to visit my page and I appreciate you and all the comments you leave all the time. Have a blessed day Love Mona
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BrightEyed

16 years 4 months ago

beautiful concept

oh so true. cant wait to read more of ur poetry, Brighteyed
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Kind a sorta

I have been playing and wanting to go back to this one alot lately for some reason,,,I do think it is how I feel about writing as a whole and how the book upon ones shelf is the words of their very being. Thank you Troy for being so honest with your crits I just love it. Helping me along the way is great and I appreiciate all and any critique out there. Love Bunches Lionessheart xxxxxxxxxxxoxoxoxoxxoo Mona
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Yes you got that crit just right my Troy friend

Yes and you can comment like this or any way deemed fit as you are the reader and it is in the poet and the reader who gets it or feels it. You know I appreciate your comments Troy for I know they are of truth and not just pretty words upon a page, Be honest and poets will learn from it.. Thanking you a whole bunch. :) Love Mona xoxox Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I re worked this

Anyone that graces this page please tell me if you like the new version versus the old version. I been tweaked tonight. Thanking you in advance Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you so much Troy

I like when someone can point this stuff out to me and that is what I call a true critique. Will be back to fix tonite, Seren is also an honest critiqer and Indi and I love the people that can give this good feedback as you know I appreciate it so much and I thank you for sure, I think you would make a great critiquer here on Neopoet. Please continue..you great man you Ephy watch out Troy is beating you to the May visit LOL Love ya guy Mona
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

I fixed it now

Okay my friend I fixed it and I want to thank you for pointing this out. I love you comment and helping me out in this manner Grazzi my friend xoxoxoxoxoxo Ms Mona Lionheart (I love that little poem you sent me maybe you should posit. The thought was so nice of you honestly xoxoxo) Mona Magic
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Lionheart

This is so cute Troy and how did you come up with Lionheart? Thats a good one never heard it before so I may use it in my choice of poetry. Thank you so sweet one you are. I reworked the poem and fixed it does it read a little better now Love Mona Lionheart xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

No I like that Lioness heart better lol

Thanks for visiting and no I did not get you to battle or pull any goalies for me now then did I? You have a great night and a better tomorrow There is always hope and song in the air. Your lionessheart Mona xoxooxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you so much nice lady

Yes this was an old one and I so appreciate your visit and hang in there, I am with you on it. I will be back to visit your page I did check and have not seen any new stuff but I know your getting ready to do one, Am I right? See you soon Licia Love, Mona xoxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

And I thank you so

I hear you with the job demands oh yea Love Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you my dearest of men here

I am glad you liked it and I keep going back to it, hmmm more to work on it and yes you are here to light the way, if you can offer any crit in any of my work please do so and I appreciate that very much See you soon Love magics02 xoxooxoxo Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Thank you

I used some and then I tweaked some. I was stuck with seed and steel so I may have to revisit it again but let me know how it reads now with your crit and you know I appreciate it immensely. Loveing ya Mona xoxoox Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

This is so true of how I

This is so true of how I feel too. Poetry for me is expressing oneself in thoughts and feelings through words. And I believe that we should appreciate other's words too. AND if someone can't give good crit, uninsulting, then they shouldn't comment at all. Well said Mona. Extra stars **************************************************************** Rosina xena465
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Aww thank you Xena

I am so glad you liked this one and I think this one may become my signature poem for my book. And I agree with you also, I like good crit but do not appeciate down right demoralizing and disrespect of other human beings. I would like more critique of my work done honestly and professionally thats what I like about this. It helps you to learn and choose you to change what you may not see in your own writings, if someone has to come across as abrasive and call peoples names and not even critique the poem that is what I see goes on in here, and to me only a true critiquer should do that and never with a personal vendetta towards someone, no matter what they write about or who they write about. Okay time for nap. Thank you for all the stars my sweet lady friend Love Mona xxxxoxoxo
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Why thank you xray

I appreciate that comment and know I do have alot of the positive in me and sometimes I tend to go to the left and right when I am provoked. I am back at task again, You have a great day and see you again, thanks for the visit. Magics02 Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.