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Jan 24, 2010
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GROWING PAINS
He who had a plan through
dotted escapades stood and
fought ended up with nought .
Frequently lifting false faces
from the floor eventually having
to walk through the door .
An unobserved introspective slant
giving grievance to self doubt and
pity, little to distract adds uncounted
scores to a pointless tally wandering,
shamelessly sure the unknown lure .
An eternal optimist searching for hope
not counted on failure set loose by the
opportunist destiny the key when plausible
has little effect ! time set aside to reflect .
Many facades the same persona , within
and without the walls of comfort finding
hope locked within the eyes of an old mans
daughter, time passes looking back opinions
rooted excuses disputed , loss distilled redressed
frilled glad past destiny was unknown from a boy
this man has grown.
dotted escapades stood and
fought ended up with nought .
Frequently lifting false faces
from the floor eventually having
to walk through the door .
An unobserved introspective slant
giving grievance to self doubt and
pity, little to distract adds uncounted
scores to a pointless tally wandering,
shamelessly sure the unknown lure .
An eternal optimist searching for hope
not counted on failure set loose by the
opportunist destiny the key when plausible
has little effect ! time set aside to reflect .
Many facades the same persona , within
and without the walls of comfort finding
hope locked within the eyes of an old mans
daughter, time passes looking back opinions
rooted excuses disputed , loss distilled redressed
frilled glad past destiny was unknown from a boy
this man has grown.
— ziggy, Jan 24, 2010
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Cascayde
16 years 4 months ago
Interesting story!Commenting
ziggy
16 years 4 months ago
hi there
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Zigs
Candlewitch
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Ziggy
ziggy
16 years 4 months ago
hi there