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loved
loved
Jan 24, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

You All

You All

You  all overwhelm me
I am no  real poet at all
I ‘m simply a passer by
On this worldly stage
hey call this  our domain

My world is
Simple and plain
Humble I shall
For ever remain
As long as greatness
of your comments
for  you
Does bring you  all
name and  fame

— loved, Jan 24, 2010

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Loved...

This poem is so lovely... I can feel your beautiful heart, through your words. Thank you for creating it... and for having the grace, to share it. Gentle regards, Raven
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

ur gracious enough to say what lovely words u do my lady ma'am i adore u rgds
S

Silent_Rain

16 years 2 months ago

:)

This in a nice poem, and as I see it, You are a really poet, and a good one... ~Rain~ Theres always a rainbow after the rain...
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

sorry for the belated thanks as i resolved my query today as to how do we come to know when we get comments
Ladderwords

Ladderwords

16 years 2 months ago

I felt that this poem was a

I felt that this poem was a kind embrace between two friends parting after a cup of coffee. Simple and lovely, your poem is gentle.
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

sorry for the belated thanks as i didn't have my bearings straight so far over here