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at the keyboard
they fall together
at the keyboard
they fall apart
at the keyboard
they fall together
and they fall apart
and they fall together
and they fall apart
and sometimes
some two
i hear
really do
get together
and sometimes
some one
i know
really does
fall apart

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Skumpfsklub

16 years 3 months ago

Been there, done that

Yeah. You're a veteran. About time you strutted your stuff, Rob. We KNOW you can handle standard form. This piece demonstrates that you aren't manacled by form. Perry
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks!

Thanks very much indeed, not only for this but also for the great blogging of late!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Very cool poem. Nice to see

Very cool poem. Nice to see a variation on the theme of pounding keys until some thoughts fall by the wayside. Kicked to the cyber curb in fact. ~A