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A Very Long Poem, I Dare Anyone. Title: Lifes Scatteres Thoughts

Life's GREAT
I like to Break open the lakes
and slither with the snakes
and race a beginer race
And never de-Face
Cause forever is this place
all Creation Dates
Back to relations of beuty like Tate
So abbreviations are fake
as well as religions are weak
lets be forgiven of our sins and eat
we msut be ridden em so we can sleep
now we gotta be forbidden em to cheat
Over lap the children like a pleat
be given em humanity please
we are all different dont you see?
but at the same time its imminent we came from the same seed
Some think lifes a tease, others think strife is our release
but to me its easy to see theres nothing greasy or cheesy or even amazing but only what we want it to be
so im wondering why cant we all be happy?
oh yea im not fond of some things as everybodybutI'm just trying to survive
I cannot lie I just don't want to die
So I try to get by with little might
using low energies to sustian my physical abilities
cause I need to suceed in climbing the life tree
but its so spicy
hard to eat
need some meat
bitches stupid in heat
im a carnivore always needing more gore
for sure
use a mortar
abuse the forclosure
and im no grazer
no hazor
but a razor
that will savior
your flavour
once my behaviour
has gone to anger
putting you in danger
wishing for a power ranger but no one can save yaCause im stronga then an alligataso check my resume
and youll say this kids great
well never have to break faith
so lets party and bake a cake
but dont celebrate to late
and appreciate cause there is a cause and effect you see
so pause and eject when you stop to breath
santa clause in a jet giving to society
the claws of a bet creating insanity
or at the malls in a fret thinking what the hell happened to me?
all these calls of mind sets making me spend my money monetarily
and its the fall off the steps thats really scarin me
due to all of these debts that are preparing me
for all of these texts to take over me
to climb like peck out of poverty
who was a novelty who helped humanitySo everyone lovin the summa sun
and everyone comming to smoke some blunts
nice unlike petrolium when the brain gets numb
so stop askin em
if you get brash well be smashin em
smoke hash dont lash and smoke crack for fun
its maximum
blastin guns make ya run
flashin em till ya done
just like a girl with a rash in em / after ya cum
dash some cash for em afta ya done
then come splash in river run
dont ask a reverund
hes passive passen em soI'ma write some spearing lyrics that inherrit fearing spirits
and I don't want to hear it cause you fear this
youre embarassed and im fearless
im an emporer
your an emperess
you can caress like a bitch
and the rest is you handle dick like chick in porno flick
so whats with it?
fuck it, ill jsut spit my shit delibrite
making fun of these kids that read of sins yet endugle in thier cringe
its a buldge in mighe grose makin me fringe
who the fuck these kids think they are?
just my luck theyll biring the end to our star
it might seem far
it might be deemed hard
but as human beings we see far
and no bringing retards
for darwinian said theyre too far gone
and for millions of years we needed a babylonSo nowIm not so far from shifting gears
So I'm gettin near like Brinttey Spears
be getting cleared of custody
So Im rustling through to get food and get on rap city
But the rap commity isnt enabling anybody to get through their sharp shooters
So I'ma hack all thier marked computers
like a shark devistating thier heart manuveurs
So like a spark in the dark im a producer
to bark on these knarcksAnd tell mewhats with all these demonds thinking they can tease the seasons?
But I see it's creates a reason to beleive in somethin deceivin
And keeps us breathen an hopeful when beaten
but also its teachen us to breach each and
I cant be fighten all this enlightened spikin tightened choke holds we have been told since our eyes were able to behold
So I despise these lies
yet Im tied through my own eyes
not to cry and feel the burst die
so scroundal my thirst is chokin me
so I curse this wtirren scroll
now chose ive to live lustfull
So ima bust a nut full of seeman on all these decevin demonds
right on their beaming, gleaming forheads
makin em more dead then being force fed moldy store bread nowWhat's the new topic?
Ima drop it hot cause Im in the tropics
and you are not able to spot me with your optics
the crop has been bought so stop itI’ve  have tried my whole life
To fill my soul with as little strife as possible
Yet it's undeniable that this is an struggle
So best not yet bust my bubble
and it's not a test you'll never see double
even with two eyes you preceive with your mind
So find something right to stop this deny of your life
Cause sometimes we must fight for time to be ours in this rhyme
So I pass my time
never using shit such as phantrimine
just hit the kind
get ripped as shit for the prime time
and never lie to dip my stick in the dame
but half as always im feeling insane
and brash as today im a great dane
lashin out with blood commin out my brain
So i wonder how much longer i can maintain
I think like sunder ill be blundered on any given day
or maybe like je sus on sundaySo what i do isI speak
I chill
I think deep
I swallow pills
So to me
There's not a big enough thrill
To make me free
Need lots of bills
So I work hecticly
but lazy still
Crazy for the mills
Hazzy deals
make me emotionally feel
devotionally ill
for comefortabilty
in my dill with no acidity
to cause a peal in me
cause in this feild its given to me
And i dont spill the livin seed
untill its time for the begining
so i fill the hole permitting
the still seed to be livingandI dont even know why we try to fight these times
cause these crimes go unheard in the raptures
even though the pain is captured
but the rain is not felt by the 'masters'
only a welt on whos its delt upon itself
but ive seen these things that have made me knelt into a welt
at the fact who can help?
even with the UN doin everything they can be to be improvin the uninion its all unreachable on top shelf
and its unteachable unless youve lived it yourself
so pivot and play the cards you were delt andSometimes I'm like Batman
in need of getting out of hand
to get down on a plan
to upload my demands
to get a fuck load of beginimans
to be bankin em for my statements
so i can be stankin em while smokin
that shit tat got me chokin but fakin em
so start bakin em
so i can proceed to suceed some green so i can be taken em
all out of the scene
cause they is making me mean
and deam unfit for a king
so beleive me when i say piety has denied me entry
to the world of plenty with no meams
just you and i see
unity is what it be
but not me for
i see only one thing
its a bee sting thats got me
in a world of differances
whats with all these systems preferences
its jsut doesnt make sense in the distance
i see equality
and just maybe
with persistance ill get to the instance
where i can actually be
close to the good essense possibly
which would be proably just intense
in this instance as a marage
might as well jsut close the garage
i first froze when i stopped to grow and started to know the glow of being a child is measurable
so now im stuck in a hole
six feet deep is how i think
and really, you dont know me
so my feeling is you can blow me
if you show me signs of hostility
but still the hating will in me is a zero probabilty of popping into me
and im not a hero just full of good energy
unlike deniro in hide and seek
im a ferro and you can confide in me
plus my bone merrow is considered delicicy
I spit faster then a sparrow flying to a tree
and i see disaster just trying to be me
hopeing to improve my longevity
yet i dim the mood when entering a room
and its i see its especially rude when turning the news
i readily see shiity things like a noose
so panting like a moose i need to lose all these things that bring autrocites
— mdehe, Jan 23, 2010

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Skumpfsklub

16 years 4 months ago

Man, I, like, totally hate this shit---but you ain't hopeless,

so long as you ain't dopeless. The problem is, like, you think at the mike and with each spike of thought you bark, and spark and make remark, but you miss the mark, because you rely on the slow-rollin' flow of what their ears all know, and, like, you don' know dat stuff. The damn thing's too long, and it's tired song, filled with tropes without hopes of bein' swallowed, you know? Like, poetry's somethin' between one and one and it's not a fight about wrong or right, but it leads to a light that you've seen. Without spleen. And then there's more, about the bitches, a man's true riches. in their smiles---but I won't go there. Which evil elf said singin' yo'self was The Poetry? That's plain wrong.
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mdehe

16 years 4 months ago

hahahahaha

So as long as you say - "I ain't dopeless". I'ma stress, I'm the best. But haters bark like alligators - "MattyD you hopeless." So I'ma fess, pay this "fatty" fee and groan less to me. Cause I'm just showin my my quest, contradictivly continuing breathing you see me and have to gloat your the best. And show, that I'm messed, and my poetry's a mess. But listen, only true words of wisdom come from a "Kings chest". So to me, you're meaningless. Cause you dont even see that poetry is for any peering geust. So to me, you're just fearing the "test".