I KNOW

Magic, I love this one. The last 4 lines really, REALLY do it for me! WOWWWWEEEEEEEEE!!! I think you are a beautiful person, just by reading this! Much love Millage x

This felt so sad but it felt like it came from the heart needs a little tidy in the lines but its a solid write dear lady ... love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

lines tidied just for you Miss Mona lol love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x I know of no attacks to thee alms to share with all of WE I know of no animosities of said beliefs not of me I know there is a better way to learn, to live, to love this day I know there is mush discord as the journey of life takes a course I know you do not know of me so why continue uneffortlessly I know that of the strifes in life how sharp the word cuts like a knife I know to not please oneself’s the anger words upon one’s shelf I know of nothing to bring such pain as there is much in life to gain I know that speak of attacks, attacks you know it is just not all that I know it’s time to let grief go and this is all I’ve come to show I know for love stands stronger still for this I continue of my own free will I know of misunderstandings of all mankind it’s time to let go, to clear the mind I know you know, I know it is true since I found me and I found you Peace and love is all I have Once you know me you will be glad

mush=much I know that speaks of attacks,attack Tongue tripping on this one how about something like I know that spoken words attack You see it seems it's not all that and it seems to me Jayne just did my jobfor me thanks Jayne lol Chrys

Dear sweet Mona:- Some lovely bits in here Mona, truly lovely; but you try too hard to rhyme, its not rhyme that must lead your words it wouldn't matter if this little creed were in freestyle as you have some fine thoughts to express, then let the rhyme come when and if it wished, you have modelled your words to fit the poem rather than let them speak for themselves and sometimes their meaning is slightly obscure because of this. "I know that speak of attacks, attacks you know it is just not all that"..............not comfortble lines to read. "of said beliefs not of me"..............( don't quite understand) "so why continue uneffortlessly"........(not a word) "I know to not please oneself’s."..................(Not plural) one. This is before reading other comments. Love to you from Ann As Jayne says its obviously from the heart.  

You have truly depicted yourself in this fine write! I hope to see many more of this caliber!