Heartsync

My heart swells
and the cares of my soul
carry on

you've given back to me
the early dawn

and I am grateful from my heart.

~

I rejoice
and what I believe in
brings me home

my station is to stand
and not to roam

and we will never be apart.

~

I can see
that the way your love-light
brights the day

I'm forever in your debt
in every way

my heart understands what's true.

~

You're the one
that lends my very heart
to be at rest

so powerful the pressure
in my chest

I'm so in love with you.

— docmaverick, Jan 23, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Must be an early Spring.

Must be an early Spring. :-) Lovely poem of love, I too feel its pressure, lifting me. Love. ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Thank-you....

...for your comment. Some things have to be said, as soon as they're felt. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Sweet Doc

I'm forever in your debt in every way. Some strong line there Doc and again this is a keeper, very well written if I shall comment to you without others commenting on my comments. LOL Have a blessed day.. Great work,keep them coming. Magnifico xoxox Mona

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

You, Mona....

...are very kind. I see that, I could've said it a little differently, and maybe a little better...but, I opted to try it this way. Again, you were very kind in your assessment. Thank-you. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Doc

Sigh ... to know a man thinks of you like this is an incredible gift I hope whomever its meant for got the message its beautifully writen ... your writing is going from strength to strength ... love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

My friend, Jayne....

...I'm really only writing what I feel, where I'm having the most difficulty, is in the organization of my thoughts. I still have a difficult time with freeform prose, but I just keep plugging away. Thank-you for your generousity in your comment, you made my "day"! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.

raskin

16 years 4 months ago

Hit one

Looks like you hit one out of the park, in baseball terms. I enjoyed the read. raskin

docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks, Raskin....

...I am happy that you enjoyed the "read"; obviously, this is a subject..."close to my heart", if you will. Thanks for the encouragement. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.