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The secret #2 (surely not the original sin… more like the original sincerity)

Your secret bathes me in rapture
No-one knows but me now
Private pleasures and divinity
Wrapped in swirling warmth and vivid crescendos
Unassuming creature
Practical of nature
Who would have known?
Beneath the surface practicality
Lies a lust that meets me hungrily
No hint of lewd exposure
No string of wanton broken hearted discards
No question as to integrity
Honesty
Commitment gladly bares your intent
A man of action without dangling hope or fanfare

Your secret has me cherished
You bless me like a Goddess
Amply in your gentle ambition
Void of power play
Filled with shared reciprocated waves of action
The swell and fall of sincerity
Of love
Joy
Bliss
The overwhelming ecstasy of drowning
The sated breathiness of resuscitation
How did you get so smooth and artful?
When did you learn such masterful attentions?
…You say it’s me, and us
And I believe you
There is magic in our secret that I never tasted
Never knew that I desired
Never knew I so aspired
And I never felt such safety in a secret
— Cloudthings, Jan 22, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Australia, regional Victoria, AUS

Favorite Poets: So many... Rumi, Spike Milligan, Keats. Many of the Neopoet clan, past & present. A myriad of song writers, Dylan, Jackson Browne, Lior, & I must add the poetic influence of painters, sculptors & creators across the world... Life really, especially the sky.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

That’s what the *secret*

That's what the *secret* does so unperceptively undeniably impossibly gorgeously well. Makes us forget everything but he as he passes through us, blissfully aware. ;-) Love, Anna
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 3 months ago

I confess I hunger to read you write of it & fling it's precious

Beautiful Anna, it's very hard to stay awy from your wonderful inspiration woman, how I miss it, all the more when I read something of you... Yes, yes, it's true, the secret is so wonderfully enticing isn't it... undeniable, as you mention...sigh. Lovely huh. How I wish it for you, how I long for it to seek you solidly, I know it has dangled it's possibility recently, I wish you every goodness dear Anna. & I confess I hunger to read you write of it & fling it's precious gorgeousness onto the page for us to feast upon... I so adore your writing, I feel a craving for it in my absence... I hope I can stretch this little (purple) moment of freedom I am stealing, in order to go read some of your latest (& others too... it is a tricky addiction this Neo, hard to be without once tasted). Be well great woman, much love & blessings to you xx Cheers Anni~ "To thine own self be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst not then be false to any man." ~William Shakespeare, Hamlet.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

You expressed it well and we enjoy its presence.

Anna said it well, she knows that bliss, not all of us do, perhaps poetic souls do, I don't know. How wonderfully wonderful to meet someone that is so in harmony with oneself that all otherness is in one. I cannot say it so succinctly and eloquently as dear Anna, she has a gift that having experienced this poem you understand, she has the wings love has given her and you have expressed these wings are part of you too Anni and all here are happy, so happy for you and send our love to you. You expressed it well and we enjoy its presence. My love to your secret too dearest Anni from Annushka P.S. You can't very well write while locked in......can you?
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 3 months ago

We are artists... we make even our mundane moment mosaiced & wov

My dearest Annushka, we all have our secrets, but I do suspect poetic souls have richer ones that light the world more brightly as they are free'd... yours do especially my Norway poet. But sometimes secrets can seem more luscious kept quiet & offered as surprise... or even harboured in our beings amid our rich & willful dreams & desires where the pokey parts of reality can't taint their perfection... heh... so much for us in this life from the harbours of our hearts/minds/souls isn't there... we are so lucky. This morning I arrived to see my beautiful friend return from her walk, without her gorgeous dark skinned baby strapped to her chest, I walked her home & visited my darling little one (the babies older sister, who adopted me when she was terribly shy with everyone else... now she has grown in boldness & confidence), George held me as I left & told me what a blessing it is for Milla to have my attention & affection, we explored the Passion fruit laughing at how the tendrils were like both our curly hair, & how they reached out for company & curled around anything that came within their reach... we drew pictures on the dry wood with a brush & rain water in a pot... she adorned them with the curly tendrils & we went on a tour of birds nests... I think of YOU in these wonderful moments & treasure the kisses she blew me as I left, knowing that there are so many outward rippling benefits we all gain from such chance connections, a small moment among the morning's tasks. I decided to put off the pressing activities I'd planned & come find you, after I wrote a quick poem inspired by the morning's digressions... I know YOU of all people will know this, I adore that you live your life in the moments such as that I feel are currently squeezed into "small purple ones" between the shadows of all the "other stuff" to get done... but then I reflect how I love my life & realise that most of the time I even love doing that other stuff & that so much of the "purple moment effect" is laced deliciously around & through that "stuff" each day... We are artists... we make even our mundane moment mosaiced & woven, harmonised & brushtroked with our observations, our intentions & our expressions.. as a result we are loved & loving, & life is so good & wonderful... & so precious & beautiful... because we know where & how to look for it to be... or how to create it when need be...Yay for artist eh!?! Love to you dear Ann of Norway xxx Cheers Anni~ "To thine own self be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst not then be false to any man." ~William Shakespeare, Hamlet.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Purple and precious moments,

Ann of Norway Purple and precious moments, you know me when I speak of the tiny things experienced in my days, you know me when I speak of my passion for so much that is interesting in this life and this world. Yah you can say it and your letter here to me is so exciting to me, your helping the little child to feel more confident, my mother did her best but that didn't help me among the mass of cruel school children, perhaps the negation from them( and the teachers) forced me into those purple corners where to my great surprise I found I was able to open secret doors within my own mind, and using them, colour the dark sad world with wonderful thoughts and ideas, all my own, the secret that no one else knew of, this was much of my life, being stupidly sensitive to the wishes of others above my own, not loving myself enough and making decisions for myself, as your Shakespeare quote says we must first form an allegiance ourselves and doing this I have learnt slowly, all to slowly, through my long life( hark at me I don't feel as if its long!!!) now I am nearly at the top of the mountain, but still am shackled with the nature of myself and its needs well up in my throat and try to drown me, but it must pass, as the fox said as her was being skinned!!! "It's Life" and so it is. But you must be thanked for your emphasis on the better sides of this life, that is the best part to grab and ride on through the clouds of existence with isn't it dear Anni, thank you with love Annshka.
WF

Worldwide Freeride

16 years 4 months ago

Your Inner sanctum ...

Hi Anni! I chuckled again at you great picture here... but was soon distracted and taken in by your write here! It like you have open your inner sanctum and your own soul escape to pass on to us the wonders of your place and heart... almost giidly prancing through life grabbing the hand of all that happen to pass to get them to open up and skip in time with your essence. So good and mighty generous of you Anni to share that with all... but then that is your personality all over. The flow of this is silky smooth poem... it is a magical orchestra write that has us humming the harmony of your spirit. Great stuff again! Dale :)
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

16 years 3 months ago

many's a time I have reached to find your own hand as I prance t

Hey lovely Dale, always a pleasure to see you at my page, you have such warm generosity of spirit... I'm not sure which picture you refer to, but I tend to have fun with them... I used to be TERRIBLY picture shy until I got more seriously into photography & wanted to take candid photo's of various folk, the change in there behaviour around a camera was a shame & often destroyed the joy that was present, it was a conundrum, but I decided to try my best at least to erradicate that effect in myself... it proved a good skill for the rest of my life regarding performing & teaching etc.... shyness is a very tricky master. Most people don't believe I was so shy in my youth, but it is a terrible sensation I am so very glad to have overcome, people don't realise how uncomfortable it can be I think unless they have suffered from it. God I waffle! Anyway I love the image you have here of the blue ghost of the tree it is joyously haunting I think if that makes sense! Thank you for your appreciation of my writing here as well, I was really touched by what you wrote... I do feel like that often, & many's a time I have reached to find your own hand as I prance through life on Neo, you are a lovely soulful companion here Dale & it is my pleasure to share with you. Lovely harmonies you hum my dear! Much love to you xx Cheers Anni~ "To thine own self be true, and it must follow, as the night the day, thou canst not then be false to any man." ~William Shakespeare, Hamlet.
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Love is good eh lol … I

Love is good eh lol ... I know I am a happy little camper as well and nothing better than seeing others find the same thing everyone should know real happiness once in their life ... I think that should be a commandment lol kind regards love Jayne-Chloe x x x