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Jan 22, 2010
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The secret #2 (surely not the original sin… more like the original sincerity)
Your secret bathes me in rapture
No-one knows but me now
Private pleasures and divinity
Wrapped in swirling warmth and vivid crescendos
Unassuming creature
Practical of nature
Who would have known?
Beneath the surface practicality
Lies a lust that meets me hungrily
No hint of lewd exposure
No string of wanton broken hearted discards
No question as to integrity
Honesty
Commitment gladly bares your intent
A man of action without dangling hope or fanfare
Your secret has me cherished
You bless me like a Goddess
Amply in your gentle ambition
Void of power play
Filled with shared reciprocated waves of action
The swell and fall of sincerity
Of love
Joy
Bliss
The overwhelming ecstasy of drowning
The sated breathiness of resuscitation
How did you get so smooth and artful?
When did you learn such masterful attentions?
…You say it’s me, and us
And I believe you
There is magic in our secret that I never tasted
Never knew that I desired
Never knew I so aspired
And I never felt such safety in a secret
No-one knows but me now
Private pleasures and divinity
Wrapped in swirling warmth and vivid crescendos
Unassuming creature
Practical of nature
Who would have known?
Beneath the surface practicality
Lies a lust that meets me hungrily
No hint of lewd exposure
No string of wanton broken hearted discards
No question as to integrity
Honesty
Commitment gladly bares your intent
A man of action without dangling hope or fanfare
Your secret has me cherished
You bless me like a Goddess
Amply in your gentle ambition
Void of power play
Filled with shared reciprocated waves of action
The swell and fall of sincerity
Of love
Joy
Bliss
The overwhelming ecstasy of drowning
The sated breathiness of resuscitation
How did you get so smooth and artful?
When did you learn such masterful attentions?
…You say it’s me, and us
And I believe you
There is magic in our secret that I never tasted
Never knew that I desired
Never knew I so aspired
And I never felt such safety in a secret
— Cloudthings, Jan 22, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
That’s what the *secret*
Cloudthings
16 years 3 months ago
I confess I hunger to read you write of it & fling it's precious
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
You expressed it well and we enjoy its presence.
Cloudthings
16 years 3 months ago
We are artists... we make even our mundane moment mosaiced & wov
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Purple and precious moments,
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 4 months ago
Your Inner sanctum ...
Cloudthings
16 years 3 months ago
many's a time I have reached to find your own hand as I prance t
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
Love is good eh lol … I