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Hi Cat, You gather a storm here well before the end of your poem... a sandstorm whipped up via a tornado of tumultant and turbulent words stapled in our mind via the sharp crystaline sharpnel of glistening sand, eevr glitter in the sky of midnight as heavy breathing, glints of steel and blood is shot-blasted in our minds by chilled by collective thoughts of this one! Without remorse, without feeling this sounds like an assassin out to sweep the desert clean with a fine bladed comb... she is the coming storm... so be frightened, be scared, be fearful... in fact just be terrified and fear for your life! Oohhh do like the darkness here! Very well worded and quite, quite menacing! Cat do bear your teeth and growl! :) Dale :)

GREAT to see your alter geo out again and he is writting as good as ever . my fav lines have got to be the first couple them words do really grip ,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy loved it ,,,,,,,,,

Filled with the raw power that is Candlewitch! I love the imagery, the way the words entwine the eye of the reader with their message, and of course, that subtle peek into a Poet's soul!

Such a wonderful poem! I especially admire the word "nomads" in your poem; it's the first time I see it used that way. It really hit home with the sentiments of your alter ego. The wording is simply superb! Thank you so much! Sincerely, Hugo

You have left me speachless Cat ,.. Bravo is all I can muster love and biggest hugs Jayne x x x x

A sad write and yet a well written piece. It has a touch of guilt,loss and a feeling of many emotions. I love reading yours and Eddies writes, always strong in form. This may be sad in my eyes and take on an entirely different meaning to others, it may not be as I read. But I also found it flawless and a pleasure to read, so, I too say Bravo. Lovely also to see you and Eddie back. Love to you dear one. Lyz. XX

Dearest Cat, I always enjoy Edge's poems, they appeal to my dark side :) Yours, ~Nina

[but I don't mind, 8)] with heavy mayhem in sleep-deprived eyes brilliant lines, have seen that look, hence the gut tearing. Great write eddy/cat Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible

Congrates on spotlight big sis ... big smile love and biggest hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x

Wow Cat This is an awsom poem. The words you used to describe whats going on are brilliant. i loved it. i will def be back to read this again love vix x

A worthy spotlight. Interesting how Nina loves 'the dark side' and I shun it as best I can - couldn't resist this one though! Boni

Written in true Eddy style. No one that I have read has come close to that style of writing except for my Man Poe Chrys

I love this Cat , the visual impact of this was so strong, like a punch. The last three lines are the ones that leave the reader looking over their shoulder...defintly awesome Seabhac

just dropping by for another read still awesome eddy ,,,,,,,,,,zigs

touring here tonight and saw this poem loved the many expression pennned in it