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Futures of The Mind
Futures of the mind
Exploding meteors a hundred thousand miles away,
not one person injured the guns are staying silent
Wonderful new planets welcomed into our new day,
angry words abandoned by men that could be violent
Tired eyes but I feel good,
as I see the words develop
Clock now ticks against me,
as the story does envelope
Sometimes writing all night long,
a verse a poem a song, a sentence
who would stop this beautiful feeling,
Is it my sanity, my mind it threatens
If I told you where my mind could drift,
when I search for ever more to writ
I’m sure that your soul would lift,
as you flew with my friend flibbertigibbet
To rise onto another wave,
and carry the hedgerow high
To plunder all that you crave,
and still belief enough to fly
gloom
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Alas our feet is on this earth,
not a bad thing I’ll admit
So it has been since my birth,
that we just have to live with it
Now we learn another lesson,
keenly that is taken to the heart
Wait, what is this I’ve stumbled on,
more adventures of my mind,
and so I must depart. Byeeee
Critiques
Rett
16 years 4 months ago
Interesting
Roscoe Lane
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you