Pit Cures in Time has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

Pit Cures in Time
Has been selected for publication @ Triond.com

http://authspot.com/poetry/pit-cures-in-time/

by
Sinbad the Sailor Man

— Sinbadthesailorman, Jan 22, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

Critiques

Rett

16 years 4 months ago

Hey Donnie

I like this. A bit disjointed in places, but overall, pretty darn good. Like randomly looking through a photo album. Respectfully, Rett: “Anyone who sacrifices liberty for security deserves neither.” Benjamin Franklin

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you, Rett I've been running on a miss firing system and

The Gaps are failing my Fire, I have moments of what I am not sure, but then zowie zing, band the darn things are gone and I am left frozen staring at a damn blank screen both on the monitor and my mind I say I got a Demon computer, but I did anoint it and I do have a conection now,at home Praise the Lord Amen. So it might be devine intervention, for some of the stuff running in my brain right now is horrifing me. And should not be delivered they way I first writt it. Donnie/Sinbad

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Needs little work sailorman

Title is misspelled theme is great and it is about memories and visuals of olden days, the golden days right? I will come back and check it out furthere my sailor man. love Mona

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 4 months ago

Yeah the title I did that to imply the pictures cure, but I see

Now that is not quite working well enough So I will it leave a minute was trying to be clever, but sleep depavation has got the better of me I think I 'll give some thought when I am a little sharper Thanks for the read and the Comments Donnie/ Sinbad

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

I see now

I see what you mean sailor and again it is lovely as such is yourself. I say it as I see it and feel it and I like your poems. Continue on and do the best that you can do with it. Ms Mona

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks magic02

My life is fairly Calm, if a rushing river could be called calm, it's a never ending dramma party here. and none of it is every mine, alone it comes to me as I seek to run from it, Help me, I need, and they know I very rarely say No, But, it is no longer as easy to get in my good graces and stay there as it was a year ago I am failing a little faster each year as if the Clock is warning me to its failing, we all must go, but I was hoping to make it to the Big rumble, a little healtier then I am now, But such is this Life so full of wonder and msytery, Picture are truely a God giving Blessing, to see the wheres and the whens and recall the whys Donnie/Sinbad the Sailor Man

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Sailor Man

I know of a sailor man just like you Happen to see him and love him too Yes life is short as we all know Make it the best wherever you go Your the sailor man, yes you are Enjoy each day, like a ride in the car For you are here and time is now Your poem quite nice,just take a bow Time stands still, time goes on Cherished moments with each new dawn. Just sat here and thinking of you and wrote this one for you, my sailor man. I know just how your feeling as my Father is going through the same thing now. Keep on writing and you know your poems will always be a part of us here. Especially to me. Love Magics02

Sinbadthesailorman

16 years 4 months ago

Lovely little gift of thought, Thank you, my dear Magic02

was my birth the 4th, I'll claim this as a belated b-day gift from you, Thanks I love it! For it was made from Love and sent from above. As all the gifts of the world it's what we do with, what we have, that matters the most in our lives. (((((hugs)))) back at you, Lady,M. Donnie

magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Your welcome

my sailor man and I hope today is a better day for you and for me. Will visit you again dear and glad you liked my little poem Just For YOU Love, magics02