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Jan 22, 2010
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Laugh along the lines
Laugh along the lines dance outside confines Love lacking all your fear cherish what you hold dearits the people in your life such as a husband or wifeshowing, for the world to see living life happy, born free Sharing a pupose, both alive not desperate or contrivedhonesty is the needed value rarely offered token, its true But we're not whole all alone we need our family n' home So Laugh along the lines dancing outside confines....
— DawningDaytripper, Jan 22, 2010
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Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
I like the lilt the
DawningDaytripper
16 years 4 months ago
Right you are Ann. I won’t
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
Good oh Julie, yes that’s