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Laugh along the lines

Laugh along the lines dance outside confines Love lacking all your fear  cherish what you hold dearits the people in your life such as a husband or wifeshowing, for the world to see living life happy, born free Sharing a pupose, both alive not desperate or contrivedhonesty is the needed value rarely offered token, its true But we're not whole all alone we need our family n' home So Laugh along the lines dancing outside confines....
— DawningDaytripper, Jan 22, 2010

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Region, Country: Robe valley, WA, USA

Favorite Poets: All of them, for differant reasons. Neopoet poets have influenced me the most over the last 2 plus years. Great teachers. Edgar Allen Poe, Dickens, way to many to list...

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

I like the lilt the

I like the lilt the rhymes, the dance I'll take and do it too with you. Do you think of them as little things? "its the little things in this life such as a husband or wife" I think I shall have to ask for an explanation I am not quite sure what you are saying? Love Ann
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 4 months ago

Right you are Ann. I won’t

Right you are Ann. I won't try to explain, that never turns out well. But after your thoughts I should beable to make it at least a little clearer. MUCH APPRECIATED! I will try to do it tonight, may be tomorrow. Thanks alot Ann! Julie D.D.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Good oh Julie, yes that’s

Good oh Julie, yes that's better, that bit worried me a little!! It still dances its way into the mind, thank you dear Julie love from Ann