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loved
loved
Jan 21, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Will You Wait

Will you wait

Wait for me

Around the edge of time

When it’s my time

To go 

Hold my hands 

Press them
to show your love

Come into my arms

Just for a while

As time slips

Beneath

Yes in a whiff

I’m about to go

Over the eternal cliff


Hold me tight
Just for once more,

For then who knows
for sure

Whether I shall be
for you,
any more

 

Your love is all I'd sought

These years gone by

How time does 
really fly...

 

Ere its time to go

Just come once my way

For it’s the last
only lovie's display

For one to lovingly say

Oh loved one
do please

Hold on

for a wee while kindly stay

The time has not yet come


My honey
to pass away


loved and lovely

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— loved, Jan 21, 2010

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

It flows from the heart and stains the page

This is MOST beautiful and I love it, this IS poetry. Now you blow me away man(?) called 'loved', you have produced a very lovely poem which I shall treasure as I shall want to do so. It flows from the heart and stains the page with purity, simplicity and beauty, what more can one ask of a work of art? Please don't jump over a cliff you have a gift in this poem that makes us wish to see more! Thank you 'loved'. Yours with love Ann of Norway
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

THANKS MA'AM

You overwhelm me I am no poet at all I 'm simply a passer by On the stage Arena They call this domain My world Simple and plain Humble I shall For ever remain As long as greatness In you Does bring you fame.
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

ma;am

have you read anyother of my poems please do and comment ur comments are adorable u urself r a great poet tooooooooooo
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks

THANKS MA'AM PLEASE DO ALSO READ AND COMMENT ON MY LATEST POEM Let me be the runner of the immortality of common sense… JUST POSTED YHANKS I ADMIRE U FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

hello ma'am

AGINGYou take my wrinkles away I shall never fade that way And when I do come If ever I do Your way Then alone I shall pay Till then be happy and pray
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

ma'am

please add me to ur buddy list i want to read more of ur compositions but don't know my way around as yet thanks . did u like my poem on ur poem
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

have u read any more ma'am

They say A politician shakes Ones hand Prior to being elected Then he shakes Every ones confidence Once he is finally elected. The fault is not his Poor ones are we In our perception Hope also in Inaccurate evaluation A politician is a politician Everyone knows How can he look after everyone? I suppose. Except his own few That’s what I wish All of you knew But wait, Though I’m alone A politician I will never own
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

THANKS

You overwhelm me I am no poet at all I 'm simply a passer by On the stage Arena They call this domain My world Simple and plain Humble I shall For ever remain As long as greatness In you Does bring you fame.
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

have u read anymore

They say A politician shakes Ones hand Prior to being elected Then he shakes Every ones confidence Once he is finally elected. The fault is not his Poor ones are we In our perception Hope also in Inaccurate evaluation A politician is a politician Everyone knows How can he look after everyone? I suppose. Except his own few That’s what I wish All of you knew But wait, Though I’m alone A politician I will never own
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

You live up to your name….

You live up to your name.... Loved. There is not one poem of yours that hasn't. This one is just too painful to respond. So I let love come and go willingly. Love. ~A
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

THANKS

You overwhelm me I am no poet at all I 'm simply a passer by On the stage Arena They call this domain My world Simple and plain Humble I shall For ever remain As long as greatness In you Does bring you fame.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

“In a whiff”………I

"In a whiff".........I know whiff rhymes with cliff, BUT the whiff of something is a strange smell, just had to say that, as its how I react to that word. A jiff would be out of keeping too, I'm not sure what will replace it. Love again Ann of Norway.
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

whiff

i couldn't find a better replacement could u ma'am istan
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

ma\am but

how do i read your profile and did u like my poem i wrote for you in ur lovely poem i read thanks pl do advise when u get the right word pl do say i will throw whiff out over the cliff that's the easiest way . i shall also think if if will do if not you will have to tell me too your interest in my work brings tears into my eyes yes of smiles and joy that's of no surprise'
M

Mandyboo

16 years 2 months ago

beautiful

this poem had such a romance to it..it was sad in a way too...but beautiful at the same time.i love your flow of the poem and the words, it all went well together.great job! mandyboo
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

u r comments are worthy enough thanks again lloved
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

hello Loved

It has been said already: This poem has both sorrow and romance. It speaks of the anticipation of loss. I know this feeling. Always, Cat
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 2 months ago

beautiful loved

i felt a sad but soothing physical lump around my heart as i read this love judy
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

thanks

The very thought embraces me With love and gratitude As I dream Of more folks like you Oh how I wish many more Like you I knew. Rgds Loved
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

THANKS ALL

THANK U EVERYONE FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS THIS IS A POEM I MY SELF CHERISH MOST
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

when one recovers

Tell her we all love her… This poem is from someone She doesn't know But when she returns home She’d know… There are very many well wishers Like me Her lovely face who’d want to see… Tell her this poem is from a Loved one And twill be better If you gift it to her from me And adjust against all the points Neopoet’s forum or guys give to me … loved
loved

loved

16 years ago

thanks

i am earnestly glad u all liked it its a lost and last wish
faithmairee

faithmairee

15 years 11 months ago

Very Beautiful

this one is real good, too. I like your style...very beautiful. ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

ur

..a WONDERFUL FIND THIS I MAY U REMIND I AM A GOOD FRIEND HUMANE AND KIND I HAVE ADDED U AS A BUDDY U DO TOO THANKS FLORIDA FRIEND
R

raj

15 years 11 months ago

Hello Loved one

i felt touched by calling of the heart for the lover in your write...and the appeal is palpable too... there is always something to take from your writes be well...stay good...smile.. raj (sublime_ocean)..
R

raj

15 years 10 months ago

it does happen…at times i

it does happen...at times i too get the emails from Neopoet belatedly much after i have read and acknowledged the comments... CONGRATULATIONS!!for making it to the Evolution...deservedly so... warmly ...raj (sublime_ocean)...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

Hello Loved

I came back again to read once more your lovely words of passing and to change my vote. My favorite lines: Hold my hands Press them to show your love Come into my arms Just for a while As time slips Beneath Yes in a whiff I’m about to go Over the eternal cliff Always, Cat