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Jan 21, 2010
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first cry,last sigh
At the first cry
the earth rejoices arrival
at each step in life
its twists and turns
meander,
but still there are cries
that glide to gentle sighs
engorge on love
and taste the heady height of risk
and then,
trawl the darkest alleyway
to experience,
just once
the agony of reality
in a flickering flame
drift to dreamland
with the knowledge
the sapling of youth
will become
the great pines
of the earth
and at death
a life lived,
will be met by cries
of a celebrated
coming home
— Seren, Jan 21, 2010
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CyberSpace
16 years 4 months ago
all I can say is wow love
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Funny thing my love, you and
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
I am so sorry you had to go
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Hmmm. We rally are becoming
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
It maybe just that darlin
Bosscombat
16 years 4 months ago
the agony of reality
Bosscombat
16 years 4 months ago
the agony of reality
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
LOL it feels funny answering
hugo la rosa
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Jayne:
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Hugo
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
your voice is growing very
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Barry
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
miss two bums? I have got to hear that story.
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
lol Matty gave me that
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
protection, love and warrior
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
and that is good to know my
arja
16 years 4 months ago
it is truly worth posting...
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
When we let our poems go,the
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Hi
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dearest Lyz