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The Beast

 

temptations eyes open wide to beauty

and listen deep to lust

letting all that is ecstasy take lead

building up to pleasure

letting out release

getting high of heat

sensuality broken free

temptation like a beast

locked in a cage

crazed and hungry for flesh

eyes wild with desire

no holding back the animal

give way to what it wants

let your hands wonder blindly

across the land of flesh

a craving in need of satisfaction

fulfill it with your lust

let the instinct play its role

curiosity taking hold

eyes seeking sexuality

sounds seeping from the lips

deep into the pleasure

no stopping where were at

lost between the walls

in trance and in hold

gripped by what is passion

sex fighting for the win

climax in the glory

to calm the beast within

 

— DimondDivinity, Jan 20, 2010

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t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 4 months ago

The beast within...

not a carnivore, it is only a response uninhibited, to the sensual desires of the beast(flesh). The poet's use of words is outstanding as he brings out a vivid picture of sexual instinct or desire. Well done and best wishes. Line 23 may need a little tinkering, if what I think is what the poet meant to say. T.
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DimondDivinity

16 years 4 months ago

thats true i should change

thats true i should change the last line to "to tame the beast within"
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DimondDivinity

16 years 4 months ago

or calm

or calm
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 4 months ago

to please the beast within...

would be the way I'd go with it, but it works as it is. One line I had a question about... getting high of heat... of or off or on, not sure, but "of" seems the wrong choice (for me anyway) great poem! Welcome to the site! Richard
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heartbreaker

16 years 4 months ago

to kill the beast with in

to kill the beast with in flows but to ease, or feed the beast within that might sound good cause a sexual calling is never dead on satisfied
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DimondDivinity

16 years 4 months ago

thats true your sexual

thats true your sexual appetite is never really quenched, your always going to get hungry for the touches and the sensations that sexual encounters bring so the metaphoric beast never really can be killed
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DimondDivinity

16 years 3 months ago

lol,, what is this

lol,, what is this evaloution I had no clue fixing a poem would put it back in can someone explain how it works lol? Keyanna
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 3 months ago

Dimond...

When you update a poem, it puts it in the mix for evolution, and that's when the stars come in to play, how many stars will determine the evolution poem.
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 3 months ago

nice poem

I really liked it. It just has a certain edge to it. Nice job.