These Beautiful Blue Eyes.

Every time I cry it happens.
I cry to much and my eyes are stained.
Stained like the colors of my tears.
The same tears that are always falling.
Falling down my face.
Running down my cheeks and then to my chin.
Where they fall off and on to the floor.

The same tears that have made my eyes blue.
What a beautiful blue they have made them.
I just wish that I could have seen.
Seen what my eyes looked before.
Before my eyes were stained.
Stained this color.
This beautiful blue.
Like the color of the sky.
Or the color of the ocean.

I think that maybe if I stop.
I stop crying my eyes will go back.
Back to the way they were before all this happened.
The horrible things that happened.
But I can't take them back.
The memories are burned in to me.
With scars of broken dreams.

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magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Oh my broken eyes

Excellent here sky. Just wonderful write of yours. Emotional, eye lifting, relection on the look of an eye and its tears... love magics02 Mona

broken_skye

16 years 3 months ago

Thanks Mona

I am going to change the title though I don't think that many people would like this title.....and i am guessing that you found his poem on the lonely's list.......most likly!!

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Not

Sky why would you want to change the title? If you like the title why worry if others like it or not, afterall it is the title you picked. Just food for thought (like the chili I made today) If that is what you felt when you wrote it I think you should keep it, however I have done so myself changed titles. Yes I visited the lonely ones today but found no lonliness in any poems I have read so far. As you know it is alot for one person to read all these poems on here but given time to and commenting on some of them makes it all worthwhile. I will also say this - I would not comment on a poem, if I did not feel it, sense it, hear it, smell it, live it, love it, hate it, any of it(LOL) so here I comment to you that I like this poem and lonely it is Not. How about a title maybe like this..Colors of blue or maybe eyes of blue or eyes of tears? Just some thoughts you pick what you feel and what you love skye and hold your head up high with your beautiful eyes. xoxoxo Much love and to my rainshower too!! Mona

Ian The Poet

16 years 3 months ago

I really enjoyed this,

I really enjoyed this, thankyou. I write poetry for fun, however if I make money it is a bonus.