hugo la rosa

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Rivers of Friendship

Friendship is like a river of clear watersrunning towards the immenseperfection of the sea. It goesamidst the plantations, the blendof colors that support our lives,the many kinds of treesand fruits and herbs providing lovewhen none is found.And with the freshness hiddenin every drop and word,friends recognize each otherand may even completethe listening with a warm smileor a silent, giving tear.A green bunch,full of hope, they gather closeto the vine, seeking for sweetness,for that dark, mysterious forcewhich makes a tiny lighta powerful guide in the stormand the rudenessof the immature ignoring thatfriendship is really a private heaven.

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Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Oh yes, oh yes dear Hugo,

Oh yes, oh yes dear Hugo, you send our minds through the complicated weave of our memories and gently tow the threads that lie so close to our hearts, your ball of twine, green leafed, divine, closes into our spirit of love's essential balms, yes, oh yes, oh yes, may you be the friend of many who recognise your understanding. Ann of Norway.

hugo la rosa

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Ann of Norway:

Thank you my good friend, thank you for your words of understanding and recognition. Thanks for caring and for flashing your presence on my page. Sincerely, Hugo

Kailashana

16 years 3 months ago

Friendship is the greatest.

Friendship is the greatest. It also is the crux of many religions. "However rare true love may be, it is less so than true friendship." -- La Rochefoucauld (1665) Love. ~Anna

hugo la rosa

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Kailashana:

Thank you my good friend, I agree with you 100%. It's nice to have you gracing my poem with your cyber presence. Love&Hugs. Sincerely, Hugo

magics02

16 years 3 months ago

Wonderful poem

I also admire this poem and one I shall come back to visit again. Beautifully written I have to say Blessings friend Mona

hugo la rosa

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Mona:

Thank you Mona for your kind words. I hope you do visit it again, like you say. I'll do the same and visit your page and poems sometimes. Sincerely, Hugo

poewriter58

16 years 3 months ago

Hugo

A poem this well written and captivating should have an equal title Friends, I wonder how many thousands of poems have this title you've created a thing of beauty give it an appropriate title "Rivers of friendship" " The deep waters of friendship" Chrys

hugo la rosa

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Chrys:

I followed your advice and changed the title. Thank you for your comment, especially for your words about the beauty of my poem. I like the poem even more now with the new title. I appreciate your help. Your visit is an honor. Sincerely, Hugo

lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Oh Yes

The man with the golden tongue, or in this case, pen, more or less. This is wonderful and you have written it so it read from the heart. You are a friend indeed and it is like you have the meaning of friendship wrapped up in one with this wonderfully written poem. Love Lyz. A gem. XX

hugo la rosa

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Lyz:

Thank you dear woman with the girly image. Thank you for considering me your friend. And thank you for your kind words of encouragement. I hope to see more of your writings soon. I'll check. Love&Hugs, Sincerely, Hugo