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The Good Dream

Had a dream the other day
that someone special came my way
to open up my heart and let me live
she had my number, this is true,
but even so I'm telling you
she did not come to take but just to give

My life has been a lonely one
and though there's much that I have done
there never was another who could share
the secrets that I never told
my fear of slowly growing old
without a true companion who would care

But now if dreams can be,
I'm praying that this one's for me,
and even though I'd never heard
love's healing word before
I feel that she's the one
to carry on with what's begun,
within my heart she'll surely be
the key to Heaven's door

I didn't have the words to say
just how she made me feel that day
or how my soul was captured by her charms
but even dream girls understand
the loving touch of someone's hand
and how they feel when held by loving arms

Now dreams may come, and dreams may go,
with very little left to show
that they were ever even here at all,
yet in my heart I know, you see,
that she was dancing there with me
and that's a dream that's easy to recall

So now if dreams can be
I'm praying that this one's for me
and even though I'd never heard
love's healing word before
I feel that she's the one
to carry on with what's begun
within my haert she'll surely be
the key to Heaven's door

C.  Lon  R.  Bruso
— Lonnie, Jan 18, 2010

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About the Author

Region, Country: New England, originally, now, Macon, N.C., USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, Bob Dylan

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Bless you Lonnie. Bless you

Bless you Lonnie. Bless you for singing your heart's song. And bless she who heard.. As usual, your words flow simply effortlessly...not a contrived word everywhere, just to fill in a space, or to rhyme. ~A ~ you transposed heart ~ 2nd last sentence.
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indira

16 years 4 months ago

the good dream

i'm new to this site. this is the first poem i read here. indeed a rewarding experience! Now dreams may come, and dreams may go, with very little left to show that they were ever even here at all, how nicely put that dreams follow a logic entirely different from the givens! cheer n best indira
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Lonnie

Beautifully written, dream or not, this was a wonderful read. Love Lyz. XX
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Good Dream

Lonnie It is clear to see your dream your heart's delight came true and it there with you. Maybe I let my heart rule my head but destined are we who met. So I hope to sing the same song of such delight one day when the magie is right Beautiful Electric Blue