There

This poem
Has become
Empty
Returning
Endlessly

— Shadowteller, Jan 18, 2010

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Critiques

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Shadow

this grabbed me ... you got a winner with this one i love it ... :) cannot see anything to fault in so few words but it has impact kind regards Jayne-Chloe

Shadowteller

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you

so much Seren (Jayne-Chloe). I appreciate it very much.

big-Alzer

16 years 6 months ago

hey Chris this is short and

hey Chris this is short and sweet a good play with words. it gets the thumbs up.

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