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The Cleavage

The Cleavage

 

Breasts are the first portion

Of a woman’s body

Those all human beings

Males and females,

Get acquainted with obviously

 

So men who normally

Don’t have breasts

Are breast fixated

They love to see

Smooth lovely looking cleavage

It adds to desire

Doesn’t it?

 

Even women know it

They all are

As uselessly obsessed

With their breasts,

As you rightly say

That all men are

With their penises

God help all

As long as breasts are taught

And penis iron like

All thoughts of sex

Will   never be fraught

 

Girls love to see men staring

As much as men want to see

Them theirs’

Hard on’s   glaring.

 

— loved, Jan 17, 2010

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bjp

16 years 4 months ago

Dear loved,

Humans are the only mammal where the females have apparently engorged breasts while not lactating. There is an anthropological theory that as we became bipedal and sex moved from rear entry to missionary, the formerly erogenous task of the bum was transferred to the breasts. The "V" is very similar from these entry positions. So, genetics self-selected for bum mimicking breasts in the reproductive process. Brian
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

LOL, fixing envy.

The fixing could be just a little punctuation/grammar. Breasts are the first portion Of a woman’s body Those all human beings, [those/that?] Males and females, Get acquainted with obviously So men who normally Don’t have breasts Are breast fixated, They love to see Smooth lovely looking cleavage. It adds to desire. Doesn’t it? Even women know it, They all are As uselessly obsessed With their breasts, As you rightly say That all men are With their penises. God help all. As long as breasts are taught And penis iron like All thoughts of sex Will never be fraught. [never or ever?] Girls love to see men staring As much as men want to see Them theirs’ [???] Hard-on’s glaring. I may have overdone it but you get the idea. A thoughtful, worthwhile write. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible