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Jan 17, 2010
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in the marketplace, ripples of sun
A fog rolls in
with the January thaw,
outside my window the
Japanese maple. bare.
patches of snow cling
to the saturated ground
death hovers for some
nurses dart about. for others
the walls are closing in
gunshots stir the suffocating air
the ground shakes and
buildings fall
crush and maim.
the dying still
die, and some still live.
we ask for a simple
truth to hold precious in our
arms.
there are no easy deaths.
a gazelle is ripped apart by
hungry lions. talons
clutch while others flee to sing
another song.
the hunger of life breaks
its bread upon the water,
ripples of sun dance through the morning fog.
with the January thaw,
outside my window the
Japanese maple. bare.
patches of snow cling
to the saturated ground
death hovers for some
nurses dart about. for others
the walls are closing in
gunshots stir the suffocating air
the ground shakes and
buildings fall
crush and maim.
the dying still
die, and some still live.
we ask for a simple
truth to hold precious in our
arms.
there are no easy deaths.
a gazelle is ripped apart by
hungry lions. talons
clutch while others flee to sing
another song.
the hunger of life breaks
its bread upon the water,
ripples of sun dance through the morning fog.
— Kailashana, Jan 17, 2010
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Critiques
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
So sad and true; an
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
….were it not for the
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dearest Mum
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Blown away
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Now I can relax for a minute
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
My darling Jayne, I have no
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
I know and I am doing ok I
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Lyz, I apologize for
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Ah you dear girl
hugo la rosa
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Kailashana:
Lunegirl
16 years 4 months ago
what a sad but true write on
kowque
16 years 4 months ago
sad….loved it allkoki
t. reflexion
16 years 4 months ago
Ripples of sun...