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Train Song
Railside lines weave music staffs
Flowing cleffed as pictured songs fly past
A silver trumpet horn of light
Plays off the lake before the night.
Timpanic factories boom now and then,
At either end of small town rondos when,
Houses’ human chorus notes appear,
Unified by roads lines cadence near.
Farm fencing string sounds go round
The earth turned deepness of the cello ground.
Among the autumn’s espressivo tones
Occasionally comes back alone
The engine horn - long, long: short, long…
The monotone refrain in this sightly song.
Then a lone three storied old stone gable sings
In sky blued keys through window gone rings
A heartfelt tune of magic rythm
The thrilling lyrics of our natural anthem.
To Montreal
The lights come up, the station stage appears,
The singing pictures disappear.
The would be audience now disembarks.
Have others heard and seen the trip’s symphonic parts?
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
You toy with us, ArrowWords,
ArrowWords
16 years 4 months ago
Nope - I'm not toying with you