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Waves of Fury Jovian Layered Rhyme

Waves of Fury

O'er crested rock and ravaged reef they sail.
Braving Neptune’s tines, past Poseidon’s tail.
They’ve been there where the ocean meets the sky.
Born on the waves of fury,  mountain high.

See sons of the sea, seasoned in the sun,
hearts of heros in each and every one.
Over the waves of fury they are borne,
set sail into the ever raging storm.  

For vested flock, savage belief may fail.  
Craving fortunes find, the last dragons scale. 
They’ve seen where devotion beats disguise, 
mourn on the graves and worry, bound to die. 

Reasons naturally see sons having fun, 
sparks the beer flows, breaching savory rum. 
Sober they crave soft fuzzy days in store, 
yet fail to beat the weather to the shore.  

O'er battered hide and bloodied bone they tread, 
bearing dragon heat, and smells of the dead.  
They found much more than glory did unfold. 
The dragons there were far from dead, nor old.  

Forced to the ends of earth, lost in the mists, 
they gather round the crew, and shake their fists. 
The dragons fly and rage against the sky,  
borne on the waves of fury, mountain high.  

Of tattered pride in ruddy tomes they read, 
sharing flagons sweet and grim tales of dread. 
Confounded such true stories went untold,
the dragons fair were marred in red, for gold.  

Of course my friends of worth must then resist, 
pray rather pound the few than break a tryst. 
To drag on sighs, and stage a saints goodbye,  
torn the brave and weary, mount and die.  

By Jove !   


— jove, Jan 17, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

I don’t know about rules,

I don't know about rules, challenges in the general forum (for I am oblivious to much). However, for some reason this song is addling my brain. from a popular English song...http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Drink_to_Me_Only_with_Thine_Eyes Drink to me only with thine eyes, And I will pledge with mine; Or leave a kiss within the cup And I'll not ask for wine. The thirst that from the soul doth rise Doth ask a drink divine; But might I of Jove's nectar sup, I would not change for thine. I sent thee late a rosy wreath, Not so much honouring thee As giving it a hope that there It could not withered be; But thou thereon didst only breathe, And sent's it back to me; Since when it grows, and smells, I swear, Not of itself but thee! I like your writes, by Jove! ~A
jove

jove

16 years 4 months ago

Thaqnk you ever so much !

Thank you for the lovely poem/song, yes, I know of it and enjoy it; as well as the slight change you made . (blush) Glad you liked the poem, it was not easy to write. If you were to read the rules in the forum, you would see it's difficulty level,(this style puts a Sestina to shame and I have written a few dozen of those.) Every word in every second verse (skip verse) has to rhyme. there must be at least 4 verses in iambic pentameter (10 syllables in, abab -aabb- abba- ... By Jove !