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Waves of Fury Jovian Layered Rhyme
O'er crested rock and ravaged reef they sail.
Braving Neptune’s tines, past Poseidon’s tail.
They’ve been there where the ocean meets the sky.
Born on the waves of fury, mountain high.
See sons of the sea, seasoned in the sun,
hearts of heros in each and every one.
Over the waves of fury they are borne,
set sail into the ever raging storm.
For vested flock, savage belief may fail.
Craving fortunes find, the last dragons scale.
They’ve seen where devotion beats disguise,
mourn on the graves and worry, bound to die.
sparks the beer flows, breaching savory rum.
Sober they crave soft fuzzy days in store,
yet fail to beat the weather to the shore.
O'er battered hide and bloodied bone they tread,
bearing dragon heat, and smells of the dead.
They found much more than glory did unfold.
The dragons there were far from dead, nor old.
Forced to the ends of earth, lost in the mists,
they gather round the crew, and shake their fists.
The dragons fly and rage against the sky,
borne on the waves of fury, mountain high.
Of tattered pride in ruddy tomes they read,
sharing flagons sweet and grim tales of dread.
Confounded such true stories went untold,
the dragons fair were marred in red, for gold.
Of course my friends of worth must then resist,
pray rather pound the few than break a tryst.
To drag on sighs, and stage a saints goodbye,
torn the brave and weary, mount and die.
By Jove !
Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
I don’t know about rules,
jove
16 years 4 months ago
Thaqnk you ever so much !