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Jan 17, 2010
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Ups and Downs
Foot hills always enamour me
Here experience delight, here,
Tardy sense, I agree. Chivvy me
Into sights forebidden. Decree,
Immutable is the decree.
Ups and downs there are
Lawns of Nature always creep,
The rebels have bruised knees.
Draw carping equality, socialism,
Dull thoughts exhort peace.
Decimated upstartism stalls,
Heralds novelty for daily breads
Flowers have mature buds,
They await fading times,
Philosophies, thoughts astray,
Nomadic languages, linguistics,
Lip service soaked in idealism,
The trajectory of fance circular.
No beginning, no middle, no end.
Always rob by sucking.
So terrorism is cowardice
Thoughtless, imbecile,
Exploitation is natural
So is ups and downs.
Here experience delight, here,
Tardy sense, I agree. Chivvy me
Into sights forebidden. Decree,
Immutable is the decree.
Ups and downs there are
Lawns of Nature always creep,
The rebels have bruised knees.
Draw carping equality, socialism,
Dull thoughts exhort peace.
Decimated upstartism stalls,
Heralds novelty for daily breads
Flowers have mature buds,
They await fading times,
Philosophies, thoughts astray,
Nomadic languages, linguistics,
Lip service soaked in idealism,
The trajectory of fance circular.
No beginning, no middle, no end.
Always rob by sucking.
So terrorism is cowardice
Thoughtless, imbecile,
Exploitation is natural
So is ups and downs.
— U K Atiyodi, Jan 17, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
A scathing social
poewriter58
16 years 4 months ago
Line two I suggest dropping