whose emancipation

I definately am going to offer some suggestions for this one .. there is a couple of places it can be tighten up to improve the flow but this is fucking awesome fixed up a tiny bit its one of your best ... bravo I love a woman thats not afriad to speak truths ... love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x its after 3am I am going to bed will visit this first thing in the morning

See that gold that you hold and lovingly stroke that’s the same gold on which some other men choke in a box of smoke & fury where no poor feet tread the earth only contaminated souls corrupted by their own wealth this is their mantra-- so go hear them cry ”kill all the bad men go make them die” but who are the bad men I question and ask, do they creep round wearing guns knives and masks? or do they simply ask questions to threaten their accusers' role, penultimates of distribution power and control? who should limit their flourishing tied up in the guise of religions' tool repetitive minds wash to make light of clever minds' fools, watch the people wilt like some poor unwatered flowers while you dine and gamble from your ivory towers; pawns of strategy to slice and dice pieces of this earth patrolled by ravenous beasts with unquenchable thirsts for all that glitters not, a oil slicks never taste bitter to their rich financed pallets and cold unfeeling hearts but these pawns have their riches in place even after their cut not so easily discarded like some infected slut used and abused by each and every pawn the sun feels your anger, the earth breathes your pain the mud feels your tears that mingles Masica blood's rain Sierra Leone, Burma, Tibet, Afghanistan, Iraq and Gaza strip, Darfur and Kuwait and all the others not mentioned of late raped by you for riches and plundered for your gold weep for the children that carry guns as these endless wars unfold ripped from their parents, burned, what fates denied, cried? Westerners question your riches but do they get their just deserts? Are all your possessions only those which adorn your fat selfish neck, And what was the true cost? Ask yourselves this: how many innocent lives lost? it's all just a smoke screen to keep you asleep all just a smoke screen so you're not tempted to peek at the real goings on in this torn-apart world don’t be so silly there’s nothing wrong with this world. (There's nothing wrong with you. There's nothing wrong with me.) (Will come back, am emotionally exhausted & sorry for the two last sentences ;-) ~A

Congratulations to both of you on an emotionally exhausted write and rewrite You have stirred my emotions opening up an old can of worms for me. Always, Cat

When the gun fires. We want to hear it go off, and feel the bullet wizz by our ear. Not an after the fact explanation of what happened.B

Dearest Vix I came back and found that our dear Anna beat me to the punch I would listen to her shes been a wonderful help to me through poking and prodding lol seriously my early writes ... well lets just say toilet paper has more use hahaha ... and I dont sleep much never have lately I had been sleeping a little more but I am back to being miss insomniac lol 3-6 hours is usually my limit cant sleep longer than that unless i am dog tired your not the first one to ask but another answer I have lol ill sleep when I am dead love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x