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Jan 16, 2010
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Lost
This is completely crazy
Can’t see straight and my vision is hazy
On me there’s mostly mud
On the other guy, there’s mostly blood
Why cant I remember what just went on?
I look up and I see I’m on my front lawn
On the ground I see a knife
Did I just end this guy’s life?
I see some guy running away
My mind is stuck in disarray
But who’s on the ground; who is he?
I look closer and I see me
I’m completely dazed
And I feel a little crazed
I try to talk, but cannot speak
I’m getting mad I’m about to freak
Then I get woken up by my dad while I’m on my bed
He said something about me yelling- why am I dead?
— Dark_Death, Jan 16, 2010
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sunscreen
16 years 6 months ago
Wow.......
Dark_Death
16 years 6 months ago
thank you =D
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