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Lost

This is completely crazy

Can’t see straight and my vision is hazy

On me there’s mostly mud

On the other guy, there’s mostly blood

Why cant I remember what just went on?

I look up and I see I’m on my front lawn

On the ground I see a knife

Did I just end this guy’s life?

I see some guy running away

My mind is stuck in disarray

But who’s on the ground; who is he?

I look closer and I see me

I’m completely dazed

And I feel a little crazed

I try to talk, but cannot speak

I’m getting mad I’m about to freak

Then I get woken up by my dad while I’m on my bed

He said something about me yelling- why am I dead?


— Dark_Death, Jan 16, 2010

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16 years 4 months ago

Wow.......

I had a crazy dream the other day, it was something like that.... Very well done.