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Stuart Reiss
Jan 14, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Rebecca

like crystals made from jewels of time
Her eyes are that of one divine
To look at her and risk a kiss
A tender heart not sure to miss

She hides this treasure behind the shade
Deep pools of loving depth cascade
That secret solemn beauty masked
Her loving heart beats from the past

To look and touch and feel her near
Would stay till dusk so never fear
So shy like one from beauty born
Her heart please keep from being torn

So to all that read this sweet little poem
Someone like Rebecca can lead you home
To guide and lead with loving hand
Likes grains of time within the sand





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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Stuart

There is nothing more touching for me ... than when a man puts pen to paper for the one who touched his heart ... another lovely write ... I would say your in love ... ;) lol and its wonderful to see you writing like this love and mountains of hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

Well Jayne….all i’m

Well Jayne....all i'm prepared to say is that she has the most beautiful eyes.....Hey congrats on the spolight...welldone!!! thanks heaps Best regards Stu
Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

LOL your not going to

LOL your not going to believe this but you just inspired a poem ... been sitting here playing with a few ideas and I read your comment and Bang I got an idea lol thank YOU !!!!! hope alls well in your world but I think it might be lol *Big Smile* love Jayne-Chloe x x
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Stuart

Good on you, a treasure for Rebecca. Ahh, love. Love Lyz. XX
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Stuart Reiss

16 years 3 months ago

I was writting about her

I was writting about her lovely eyes..She is a friend ok....I swear you and Jayne are gonna get me in trouble lol... take care rgds Stu
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Stueys got a girlfriend, ha, ha,

Can we? Get you in trouble,lol. You dear sweet man, you have put the biggest grin on my face. Hey, you hang in there babe, you will just have to put up with the tease, lol. Okay, I will quit it. lol. But my friend, I see Rebecca enjoyed it too. GOOD. To just friends, love to you both and u must fill us in on your next trip to the Rocks, ah, lovely that place, when you are with a FRIEND. Love Lyz. XX
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becklawrence73

16 years 3 months ago

Stu,

I love it xoxo
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Dear Becklawrence

Apologies hun, we just like to tease. Stu is a great guy and yes, this poem is a gem. Take care and love to you, Stu's friend with the lovely eyes. Love Lyz. XX LOL.
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becklawrence73

16 years 3 months ago

Hi Lyz,

No need to apologise...he secretly loves you girls stirring him. And you should know, my friend Stu has pretty amazing eyes too. Ciao Beck xoxo
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lyz

16 years 3 months ago

Beckas got a boyfriend, lol.

Ahh, a new target. Lol. Well from this gorgeous pic, I cannot see his eyes, nor yours for that matter, lol, but I will take your word for it. Love to you both, From me. XXX
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Worldwide Freeride

16 years 3 months ago

Subtle sweet Stuart!

Aahhh now this is just lovely and touching.... no over done sickly sweet poetry here just a lovely heart flowing, well worded poem that leaps out takes your hands, skips home merrily and leaves you on the doorstep with a big wet kiss! Very heart warming Stu and I am sure Rebecca loved it and you all in one big cosy hug! Nice write my friend! Dale :)