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Jan 16, 2010
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The simple touch just take it
We touch on this and that
we sometimes touch each other,
so understanding one to each
awakes a potent lover,
lying latent in our hearts
we wish to feel we take our part
in this old funny thing called life,
so take heed all those in pain or strife
reach out, for there are waiting
great gifts for your partaking
in life we love relating each
in our own way, make speech
about our ordeals, troubles,
share their feelings muddled,
help to sort it out with thoughts,
turning all our fears to nought,
life's a great redeeming sport,
if we learn its art,
we can all take part,
so take your pen, and start.
— Nordic cloud, Jan 16, 2010
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Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Life is a painting, many
Damo
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you for your simple
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
As you so elequently state
hugo la rosa
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Ann of Norway:
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Amazing
Idlemindwondering
16 years 4 months ago
We are
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Simple Touch
loved
16 years 1 month ago
you too
magics02
16 years 1 month ago
Snowlady