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Jan 15, 2010
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The promised nite
The promised Night
It will be a longer one,
If tonight is that night
For which you have waited
All those nights
Till tonight.
So till she comes
On the promised nite
Read this one tonight.
Do You Read Me
Here I’ve learnt
Read me twice
I’ll read you once
My first 10 poems
None read.
Now they all read
What I post at once
many poems in all
Adding more and more,
Of your own self
You have to be sure
What you want more?
Cents or folks
Both sexes to allure
Read me
More and more
— loved, Jan 15, 2010
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Critiques
magics02
16 years 4 months ago
Allure
loved
16 years 4 months ago
loved
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
nice read
loved
16 years 4 months ago
message
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
I think you way over-use the
loved
16 years 4 months ago
thanks