Chasing Dreams

Chasing dreams
how does it seem
no rainbows, nor goldnot of young, not of oldDreams of longing
to belonging to..
Chasing dreams
how far do they seemis it another happy scene.
for is it to remain unseen a suns ray lights of gold
light thee eyes, dark of old

Chasing dreams have finally caught upFor longing, for loving
that buttercup..

— magics02, Jan 15, 2010

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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

TITLE GOT ME IN, LOL.

Lovely and you may have caught your dream you were chasing. And what lovely words came from your chasing and wondering. Love Lyz. XX

Nordic cloud

16 years 4 months ago

Oh please forgive me my sweet dreamer Mona

Oh please forgive me my sweet dreamer Mona, I have taken the buttercup and tipped it over on the clover forgive me but I did a little alternative ditty for my own amusement. I love the idea and the thoughts behind it, lovely dear Mona. My version :- Chasing dreams how it seems no rainbows, no gold, not young, not old dreams of longing, of belonging chasing thoughts so far away this other happy scene consoles my way the sun its rays of gold light eyes as days of old those fleeting dreams have caught me up while longing for my buttercup Skaal, cheers with the buttercup of your dreams dear Mona, love from Ann of Norway Sigh, no buttercup in sight they sleep, those ranunculi under their bed of snow.

Millage

16 years 4 months ago

Just like you..........

...Mona, a beautiful write. I really do love your work. There is so much tenderness in these words. ;-) Much love Millage x

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Fill me up Buttercup

Mona Dreams for longing - longing to belong too I know this only too well as this is all I have left now Chasing dreams always maybe you can take a look at my poem Chasing the Unknown lovely Electric Blue