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Kailashana
Kailashana
Jan 15, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Last Day

this space for hire.
— Kailashana, Jan 15, 2010

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magics02

16 years 4 months ago

Another lovely piece

Great here Kaily and the picture of the tree on the mountain is that where you live? I just love that photo...and this short story..maybe I shall try this also sometime. xoxoxo Ms Mona
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Orphani

16 years 4 months ago

Wow, Anna that would make a

Wow, Anna that would make a fantastic opening chapter. Go with it. You have to. This is a story that needs telling. We want to know who she is .Don't make us not forgive you, and break out the tearful, soulful, explecatives.Do it Now! Or sooner.B
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

I am with Barry … just DO

I am with Barry ... just DO IT .... love and hugs Jayne x x x I want to know more in so few lines you made her tangiably real
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

you added to it ….

you added to it .... moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lol please pretty love and mountains of hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x x
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Orphani

16 years 4 months ago

She’s such a hard boiled

She's such a hard boiled egg Seran. We need to wooo off that shell, and bite down till she cries, yes ,yes, yes. oppps, Sorry dear. B