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Jan 15, 2010
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promise
trees in the garden sparkles
sharp and clean
of snow and
beautiful promises for
the next decade
a new with you
our first year
and I save a date in it
on a sheet of paper
to hang
rolled in the snow covers
in the cherry tree
soon, we'll share name
— odd molly, Jan 15, 2010
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lyz
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Girl
odd molly
16 years 4 months ago
Thank You so much dear Lyz.
lyz
16 years 4 months ago
If this is daydreaming,
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 4 months ago
Happy New year... woith double congratulations perhaps?!
odd molly
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Dale,Yes, snow ,
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
You need to develope this
odd molly
16 years 4 months ago
Thank You dear O.Yes a good
Craig Norris
16 years 4 months ago
anew with you
Millage
16 years 4 months ago
I doff my cap....
odd molly
16 years 4 months ago
Thank You so much dear M.I