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promise



trees in the garden sparkles
sharp and clean
of snow and
beautiful promises for
the next decade
 
a new with you
our first year
 
and I save a date in it
on a sheet of paper
to hang
 
rolled in the snow covers
in the cherry tree
 
soon, we'll  share name
— odd molly, Jan 15, 2010

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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Girl

Is there a congratulations somewhere hidden here? Lol. You are a beautiful spirited writer, and this poem of Promise, and the new year, reads to me so fresh and yes, happy. Wonderful. Love Lyz. XX
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odd molly

16 years 4 months ago

Thank You so much dear Lyz.

Thank You so much dear Lyz. I guess I am daydreaming to much. Happy New year to you girl and may lovely promises and happiness rain on you. love. o molly
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lyz

16 years 4 months ago

If this is daydreaming,

Give me more, Lol. And back at you, hope this year brings you all that you have dreamed for. Love Lyz. XX
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Worldwide Freeride

16 years 4 months ago

Happy New year... woith double congratulations perhaps?!

Heya Molly! This for me is about start of somehting new and good but also things that are based around the heart! Happy new year, season and decade to you... I hope that it brings much joy, happiness and frivolity for you! I think that sheet of paper is for your friend and it is a special date for them of which you are invited, but I am uncertain as it could be something that is special for you!? Either way Molly many congratulations are in order as I raise a glass of the fizzy stuff in your honour may that day come by with dove carried scents and Angel carried blessing for you and your friend Molly! From the start with the trees covede in fresh snow to the happiness of sharing names (how many brothers and sisters do you have?!) everything holds much promise for the new decade... and I am so sure happy tidings will ensue, and that glee and romance will forever play in your heart. If it is especially for you Molly then I am doubly excited for you and hope that your spirit dances eternally with your soul-mate! Hope I have got that right! This write is utterly lovely Molly and testimony to your caring and loving being. Much love, Dale :)
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odd molly

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Dale,Yes, snow ,

Dear Dale, Yes, snow , champagne and fireworks and a new beginning... I love your comments Dale .. you are a wonderful star. love. o molly
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Orphani

16 years 4 months ago

You need to develope this

You need to develope this further Moll; it seems a little raw in the preasnt form, though a good base to start from. B
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Craig Norris

16 years 4 months ago

anew with you

our first year and I save a date in it on a sheet of paper to hang rolled in the snow covers in the cherry tree soon, we'll share a name that Spring shall bear Love and love, I really like the first line, trees in the garden sparkles. How beautiful it is on winter days when the sky sits pale blue and the sun dances. Craig
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Millage

16 years 4 months ago

I doff my cap....

Pure lovliness my sweet. Sincerely, I love this. Much love Millage x