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Our Past Beneath Our Feet
It doesn’t matter that
We didn’t know you,
Your name eroded
Above this graveyard plot,
Your place
Not by history marked,
Nor to great events connected
That even like an unknown soldier
Would otherwise note your part.
But like your fissured stone,
Your missing presence in the past,
Even just your may have been walking on this grass,
Would, by tiny cracks of absence
Of some substance lost in us
Imperceptibly diminish
Our cosmic consciousness.
Upon the pictures of what has gone
We gaze on heroes and the greats
Nobles and devils,
Those we love and those we hate.
Yet without the painting canvas by most of us ignored,
This fabric, we its warped and wefted threads,
This stretched taught plain of plainness
Upon which these epic daubings stand,
Would be our own history fractured
And us this canvas, torn.
Even while looking upon your place
Our standing present here
Drips its instant droplets
Of this now becoming then
Moments falling from our lives
Absorbed to yours before
Our dreaded destined end.
We splash our colours.
Despite in hope of memorable shapes and signs
Until our story stops its flow,
We gladly add our likely unknown tale,
Our brief and humble history standing,
Mixed with yours forever.
Becoming this and all the ground
Of all we’ve been together.
Critiques
docmaverick
16 years 4 months ago
I really felt....