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Jan 15, 2010
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A Withered Rose Left
there grew a flower
in the soil of their
distance rich expectation
and she warned that
he had painted too hard
a picture that should blur
till they reunited in
a focus but young men
specially lonely do not listen
blinded by the promise
made by a fiery heart
to a subservient mind
when this distances blanket
folded and met on corners
the rose stood them tall
only rain days brought
the canvas into focus
and in the aperture light
downed the detail of
a withered flower that
one set of hands cannot save
and the phantoms of her fingers
did not cull the soil and he
left her under falling petals
wiping the cold dirt from his palms
— Ladderwords, Jan 15, 2010
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U K Atiyodi
16 years 4 months ago
A withered rose left
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
Mr. U.K.Atiyodi is right. Definitely a talented poet